Restart however many times you need. The story is there. It has so much potential. I've liked every version of it. Mostly.

Rest in piece Author-San

Most likely

6 years later and nothing yet is happening. This writer is dead.

um u need a lot more time

Well, just read the other two stories, and the grammar is horrible, like, I guess as might just be used to it from other stories, but this is a nice idea and story. Also, considering the leaders of the races (at least he Zerg one,) are like the opposite personality of the original game's race, maybe the Protoss one would leave his family to be alone with his faction, possibly even becoming he Tal'Darim. Or maybe I could write my own fanfic about that since it might not be following your story the best way.

not as much of a fan of this as the original, shitty grammar include
was kinda endearing, sorta

Pls Finish this story, both your earlier version and this one have drawn me in so that i cannot stop reading it! Ps Nice rewrite so far.

What happened to the story are you going to continue 8 or not

So, continue the Zerg story off planet...

THat is a nice plot out...

... again

Seriously, where did the Bridge Go?

is this over

one if the few trully great starcraft fanfics i have ever had the pleasure of reading sure it has flaws but all great stories do so keep up the good work and ignore the haters

the zerg culture is defined by its leader. you do realize that right? look at other zerg centered stories and build a culture there. did you really not have a thought pattern for the main charature? if so you really need to build up the main charature with a goal of either diplomacy or conquest.