Reviews for The Zerg Swarm - Neo
John Nicholas Bendix chapter 3 . 10/5/2021
Restart however many times you need. The story is there. It has so much potential. I've liked every version of it. Mostly.
Man Man chapter 3 . 3/13/2021
Rest in piece Author-San
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2019
Most likely
Anon chapter 3 . 2/3/2019
6 years later and nothing yet is happening. This writer is dead.
oddest zombie chapter 3 . 11/27/2018
um u need a lot more time
kluebug chapter 3 . 10/23/2018
Well, just read the other two stories, and the grammar is horrible, like, I guess as might just be used to it from other stories, but this is a nice idea and story. Also, considering the leaders of the races (at least he Zerg one,) are like the opposite personality of the original game's race, maybe the Protoss one would leave his family to be alone with his faction, possibly even becoming he Tal'Darim. Or maybe I could write my own fanfic about that since it might not be following your story the best way.
Sebine chapter 3 . 10/5/2018
not as much of a fan of this as the original, shitty grammar include
was kinda endearing, sorta
Guest chapter 3 . 8/15/2018
Pls Finish this story, both your earlier version and this one have drawn me in so that i cannot stop reading it! Ps Nice rewrite so far.
Ragnafang chapter 3 . 5/27/2018
What happened to the story are you going to continue 8 or not
Talon5Krrde chapter 3 . 4/23/2018
So, continue the Zerg story off planet...

THat is a nice plot out...
Slim Dustpan chapter 3 . 3/18/2018
... again
Lololol chapter 3 . 12/29/2017
Seriously, where did the Bridge Go?
mmiller25819 chapter 3 . 12/23/2017
is this over
highking cartef chapter 3 . 2/20/2017
one if the few trully great starcraft fanfics i have ever had the pleasure of reading sure it has flaws but all great stories do so keep up the good work and ignore the haters
guest chapter 3 . 1/12/2017
the zerg culture is defined by its leader. you do realize that right? look at other zerg centered stories and build a culture there. did you really not have a thought pattern for the main charature? if so you really need to build up the main charature with a goal of either diplomacy or conquest.
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