Reviews for The Zerg Swarm - Neo
siraaron1 chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Once again u started way to powerful. You'll make it a couple chapters then you'll be frustrated and scrap the story again. Start low work high. Its not interesting to have a hero with no conflict. Your a good world builder, low with character arcs.
Sharnorasian Empire chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
Whoo, love it, an interesting twist over the original, I love the different changes, certainly makes for a interesting story line. Still love the original. Do you have a beta yet?

the metaphysical god of heroes chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
I am so happy that you continued this story. The beginning was very informative and well written too.
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