Reviews for Combination
Mh3n013 chapter 3 . 11/4
This chapter is this is the only chapter that is bad
TyrVidarrus chapter 10 . 8/24
I really like this story. It is as good as all of your others that I have read. Your ideas, characters, and plotlines flow together well. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but they are almost always easily ignored and don't break the flow in a way that really detracts from the story. The ONLY thing that I would really like to see changed about your writing is for you to continue the stories you have already started... like this one.

SpencerDorman chapter 3 . 4/25
Ok, I know that parents love their children and all, but sitting in a chair for an entire month straight? That is some ridiculous shit, beyond what their love, even their heightened emotions caused by guilt, could rightfully cause. I'm not really complaining, I'm just disbelieving, I guess.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/6
As u can probs see
I'm at chapt. 10
This is because I jumped, y?
Cause your story is suck balls that's is why!
I can't take anymore !
Guest chapter 5 . 4/6
spoke the owl with a female's voice that flowed like water over Naruto's person. He didn't know what it was but he knew he could trust her.

Why couldn't it be a male's voice that flowed live rocks over Naruto's people.
And Naruto is quite the retarded ninja to be going around trusting people...
And it seems that it's not only him, Shishui is pretty stupid as well; who makes a stranger who is bleeding out and raving nonsense their 'legacy'
I thought this story would have improved by now... But on second thought maybe it wasn't the story I read before...

Kind Regards,
Your friendly neighborhood critic.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/6
Yeah go ahead master swordsman Naruto
Tell everyone about your abilities!
Oh and keep watching movies which have soooo been released.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/6
Naruto the snitch bitch (I can't believe I typed that: See what your ass kissing caused me to do).
I laughed when izuna told madara, who's barely got any screen time, "you've changed"

I thought he was the one who's changed...

Kind regards,
I think in starting to like... Not!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/6
*sniff* *sniff*
This was so... Touching...
I can't even fathom... The amount of bullshit I'm going through right now!
People waking up from comas like it's just sleep?
Fluff even at the brink of insanity?
This chapter sucked ... Badly

Kind Regards,
Someone who hates this parts. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6
I have.. Read this before.. And I must say..
I remember why I nearly quit: The first chapter sucks *ASS*!
"1,2,3 GOOOOO"? The fuck was that?
Madara giving a speech like an mc?
Waaaaaay too much unbalanced fluff.

Kind Regards,
Someone who wants to puke.
Oblivion196 chapter 10 . 1/11
Plz continue this!
Lewis-Sama chapter 10 . 10/6/2016
Loving it. Can't wait to see what happens next.

May I ask who all will be in the harem? Will Hinata? Or Mikoto?
Ryou Kuroda9 chapter 10 . 8/5/2016
I love the story please keep writing it.
lostxinxthexdarkness chapter 10 . 5/1/2016
Great story so far! I hope that you upload another chapter soon!
Guest chapter 10 . 4/6/2016
so he going to be in a harem with naruko yakumo and anko huh
Guest chapter 10 . 3/31/2016
A good story there are many spelling mistakes throughout but it is still readable. I was disappointed to see that this is as far as you got with it you had so much potential for this story hopefully you decide to continue it as it does have a really good plot for it if you read around the many mistakes.
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