|Reviews for Vision of the Jedi|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/23
An excellent start to an interesting story. It is unfortunate you haven't continued it further.
| Comet Moon chapter 1 . 4/5
Love the early L/M meetings. Wil of the force another great.
Sadly, not to hopeful on the movie showing the.
Mara is one of my all time favorite redheads, right up their with Ginny Weasley. ( not so much cannon, but my own thoughts on her. A rebellious prankster force of nature. Wicked in the best way(I agree, not cannon, read your bio. Forgive me being a H/g and I'll forgive you being an h/h)
But back to vision.
Mara has had her entire life ripped apart, and though a better future seems hopefully in the future for her, I bet her past will come back to haunt her in more ways then one. Both memories and the empower.
Wonder what yoda will do when he discovers the bond and the jedi's creed?
Not to mention daddy.
Hasd an idea for a L/M story with a very early and unheard of trainers for them. Just trying not to make them to Mary sue
Thank you for the story, going to read shifting sands next, looks like a long one.
Have a greater day
| Deathmvp chapter 1 . 3/29
This is a great start to the story. I realy hope you will add more to this story soon.
Some thought that may help your muse get back in gear.
1) Has Vader felt the change in Luke and if so what does he think?
2) Has the Emrore felt the change in Mara?
3) What will Yoda think of the change?
4) If Yoda is agenst it or as a test how will Luke and Mara react to him tring to break the connection?
| Zanthraxone chapter 1 . 3/26
This has got to be the most awesome, best Luke/Mara story I have ever read. And I have read all of the Books, Comics and Most of the FF stories. I would love to see this story completed or at least ended on a happy note. But due to the fact that it has been 2 years I figure it isn't going to happen. I would like to say that besides the fact that Timothy Zahn and many others who write Star Wars books involving Luke and Mara while they are great and they are fantastic stories they don't have the bond that you show in them. On that note it could also be i'm a sucker for romance between those two and most of the books well they don't have that much of that. "Maybe I've forgotten however and need to reread them" Hmm...
Anyway now that my review is an entire paragraph. FANTASTIC Chapter/Story/Oneshot and I would be ecstatic to read more in the future. If not well I always have this one and I can always imagine how it will play out heehee.
| Rogue7 chapter 1 . 3/21
Interesting story so far, I'd love to see you continue it at some stage
| whitetigerwolf chapter 1 . 1/30
I really hope to see more of this.
Keep up the good work.
| Gryffindorgirl746 chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
Through I don't like Mara & Luke together, I must admit this is a great story. You should complete it.
| Angelalex242 chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
I'd like to see what Yoda says about these two. If this story ever gets continued.
| Saito Ryuzaki chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
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| alphaminkus chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
Need an update! Amazing story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
Loving this so far. I hope you continue.
| DarkPirateKing69 chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
i'm not a FAN of SW.. as in, able to list all the major events since Revan's era.. but i do find intriguing stories every now and then. the reason why i'm not actively searching for SW stories, is that my OCD kicks in every time. it happens with other franchises with extensive lore too.. i end up drowning myself in whatever wikia there is and all the other possible source materials before i'm satisfied..
oh well, usually it's worth the effort, even if it's often tine and/or money consuming.
| C5SysEngFTS chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Great story. Cannot wait to read more!
| Dragonball X Avalon chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Great story update when you can
| wedgegeck chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
I just had to reread this story again. It's my favorite Luke/Mara fanfic (even with only one chapter completed). I've read several of your other stories; The End and the Beginning is excellent, and The Last Casualties is even better. Even if you never write another word of this, it will remain a favorite of mine. Thanks for writing!