Reviews for Let's Have Dinner
Corina chapter 2 . 4/11
Great job
Pipergirl17 chapter 3 . 12/15/2016
Bravo! Great story, full of delicious sentiment. You had them fall for each other in a way that was so believable, and it was impossible not to hang onto every word. Thanks so much for sharing!
Pipergirl17 chapter 2 . 12/15/2016
Just stopping by on my way to chapter 3 to casually mention that "After we misbehave" melted my panties. Just sayin'...
Dalmasio chapter 3 . 6/10/2016
A masterpiece ! I've never read a Fanfiction exploring its characters' inner thoughts so thoroughly. It's impressive, considering who those characters are ! A fantastic tribute to Sherlock and Irene. Are you sure you aren't one of the players ?
september.again chapter 3 . 8/28/2015
Awesome! Loved it. I'll go check our the sequel
Nispedana chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
Ooooh loved how you started. I could tell this'll be good for my IrenexSherlock-loving heart. lol
xxasdfghjkl chapter 2 . 4/19/2014
So beautiful and in character! I could definitely see the "eat together across the room" scenario playing out. Also enjoy the subtext a lot. One thing to watch out for is long sections of subtext at once, because it seems too unrealistic. Instead having on spoken phase imply one other sentence is makes sense and flows better.
MakorraLove97 chapter 3 . 3/11/2014
Seems good ;)
MakorraLove97 chapter 2 . 3/11/2014
Oh my God! This chapter was absolutely long and amazing! I love how your write, you're so good at it! :)
MakorraLove97 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
I absolutely loved it! Brilliant job! :)
hatondog chapter 2 . 2/10/2014
Absolutely terrific. Well tied into the actual dialogue and in character, with a satisfying outcome.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/24/2014
Guest chapter 3 . 1/24/2014
Oh my goodness, this is so good! It's possibly one of the best AdLock ffs ive ever read... And that's saying a lot! All of the characters were completely in character- well done in portraying Sherlock and Irene, by the way, they were fantastic- and they acted so perfectly! And I loved the silent monologue they shared AND THIS WAS SO GOOD I KHANT EVEN-
I love this so much. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
Han Alister chapter 3 . 1/18/2014
Estef Torres chapter 2 . 1/9/2014
This is perfect. Exactly how a Adlock fic should be.
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