Reviews for Nonage
FernandaStark chapter 1 . 7/11
OMG I love this story!
Laihi chapter 1 . 1/25
loved this! hell, even I knew better than to underestimate a 5 year old Tony stark.
SaiyaCat chapter 1 . 5/18/2018
Epic
Dirtkid123 chapter 1 . 7/20/2017
Awww! THIS WAS SO FREAKING BRILLIANT! I loved this!
Biancamanda16 chapter 1 . 3/11/2017
Hola traduje tu fanfic
Estubo genial muy divertido :)
cartoon lover 2016 chapter 1 . 2/15/2017
Loved the ending, great story
Wowza48 chapter 1 . 12/3/2016
I love stories like this one.
DeeplyBroken chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
I liked seeing Tony as a child. That was definitely something I don't see enough of. Though some parts were down, it was an overall cute story.
Tekie Scythe chapter 1 . 6/29/2016
well, that very obvious spot had me cackling like a madman.
Connwaer Heap chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
This is so awesome! I love deaged fics, and you wrote this one awesomely! :) I love that you brought Jarvis into it, and Tony's joy at being Captain America's friend is so sweet.
lw117149 chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
Lol oh i loved thisthank you.
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
this was great! loved seeing five year old Tony giving them HFIL ;P
awesome-ness :D
fiesa chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
I finally found time to continue my reading... Oh, once again a story of yours kept me in suspense for quite some time, and I enjoyed reading it a lot!

I liked how you made Tony revert to his five-year-old self without his memories or all of his abilities as an adult. I don't know how I would have felt about a tiny Tony with all his wits, his cutting-edge humor and his drinking, snarking, working and people-handling habits. The description you made of the little boy - terrified, afraid of being kidnapped, finding himself with strangers and just wanting to go home - was heart-wrenching and very, very good. I think you managed to portray Tony in a way that really could have been him as a five-year-old.
Another very nice aspect of the story was the changes in perspective. Jarvis, Widow, Steve, Bruce - I liked that the reader got to know a bit about all the characters, how they felt about little Anthony and how they coped, mentally. I especially liked the part in which Natasha spoke to Tony in Italian, to remind him of his mother.
Edwin Jarvis was a wonderful character. If I remember correctly, you invented him completely? I really liked his polished humor, his strict character and how his love for Tony still colored each single one of his words, thoughts and actions. Especially the ending was beautiful - Jarvis taking the Avengers to the Stark Mansion and telling them stories about Tony's childhood. I had the feeling this was the only reason he wanted to take Tony there - to remind him of his parents, and his childhood - but perhaps he had another plan, as well. Either way, the Avengers had a good afternoon together, and that definitely is worth it.
The Avengers were quite upset at Tony's change, and everything you wrote about their thoughts and actions made me feel like they genuinely cared and worried for Tony. Especially the fact that they went against Fury's orders, especially Clint.

I really, really enjoyed the entire story - there are still much more details I could mention here, which I noticed and liked a lot. But overall, I loved the details. Jarvis' voice and its resemblance to JARVIS', the fact that JARVIS has developed enough of a persona to call on Bruce instead of letting Fury take over. Clint's outrage at the prospect of Tony having tinkered with his bows. Tony correcting the Avengers' eating habits, and Natasha ignoring them completely. The pain little Anthony felt due to the Arc reactor. All of those things, and more.

Reading this story, once again, was immensely enjoyable. Thank you for sharing it with us here!
BlueRubyBeat chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
I couldn't stop laughing through this! It was hilarious! I especially loved the part where Tony kicked Clint in the groin and Jarvis told the Avengers of Tony sewing a Captain America costume for Halloween. XD Loved the fic~!
LynDea chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
It was awesome. Loved how long it was. Perfect. Good job.
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