Reviews for In My Place
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 4 . 6/13/2013
Cute
Nathoca Malfoy chapter 4 . 5/24/2013
OOOOOWWNNNNN...
Nathoca Malfoy chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
WOW!
tjw1989 chapter 4 . 5/7/2013
Great chapter thank you
Please update soon
RoseFromTheGrave chapter 4 . 5/8/2013
You are in serious need of a beta. This is a good story but the errors in grammar and spelling are throwing it off.
potterhead27 chapter 4 . 5/7/2013
hmmm keep going want to read more before i judge. Also (this is just advise u can keep it or throw it away) u keep switching from the past tense to present tense for example( Good" the boy said rudely "you deserve it"
"did she said that too?"
"no… mom always stood up, when we're talking about you"
"she did?") the advise either get a friend to beta it or reread from the start anyway loving the plot keep going
Guest chapter 3 . 5/1/2013
yeah you need to fix your grammar because it is total crap...good storyline tho, just work on the grammar
Guest chapter 2 . 4/30/2013
I love this difficult teenager Draco is having to deal with.
Frankie22 chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
Please keep going! I really love the story! :)
tjw1989 chapter 3 . 5/1/2013
Well that shut her up didn't it
Love it please update soon
Guest chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
I love the start of this story. I like Draco dealing with a difficult version of himself.
tjw1989 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Argh upload asap I want to know what happens next
tjw1989 chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
Another great chapter
tjw1989 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Love the start upload soon pretty please :-D
sleepyPrincess chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Interesting start for your story. I hope I can read more soon!
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