|Reviews for Elephants|
| michaudia chapter 34 . 3/9
I dropped everything when this alert came through...and it was totally worth it.
But seriously... I made a most undignified noise (Somewhere between a squeal and a yelp? Yeah. Probably.) when I saw this.
I am thrilled that you're back and this is so worth the wait!
Thank you. ThankYouThankYou.
| CharlieTheCAG chapter 34 . 3/9
Took the time to read this even at Disney! Killed it lady.
| jkarr chapter 34 . 3/9
this is a nice update
| afret2010 chapter 34 . 3/9
Great update! I loved Jane's lame attempts to explain why she was visiting Maura in the morgue.
| alexteg chapter 33 . 3/3
update please can't wait lol
| Guest chapter 33 . 2/27
this isn't done, right? you're coming back?
| Guest chapter 33 . 2/20
Time for another update. I am really enjoying reading your story and cant wait for more. One thing I love about your writing is that you have few spelling mistakes and your writing flows well.
Keep up the good work!
| guest00 chapter 12 . 2/17
Please update soon, really missing your prose.
| Rlkite chapter 33 . 2/17
Please tell me you're finishing the story. It's my favourite
| Mo Phillips chapter 23 . 2/16
Just reread what we have so far of "Elephants" and wanted to say thank you.
Love this story, love that you have captured the characters so well and the journey you are taking them on.
| Guest chapter 33 . 2/12
YOU are such a beautiful writer - I hope you never stop writing
I love all of your stories for this fandom and I hope that you will continue to write for it
I just can't get enough of your work! Keep it up :)
| ttandme69 chapter 33 . 2/2
| davislp chapter 33 . 2/2
Omg, I love this chapter! And not because it is INSANELY hot and sexy. Love the way you started to bring together all these strings of Jane's anxiety together and address them. And the return of the starfish metaphor? Beautifully done. Thank you so much, as always.
| Miched8 chapter 33 . 2/1
Just found your story and I love Love LOVE it! Looking forward to the next update.
| EL chapter 33 . 2/1
Firstly - YAAAAAAAYYYYY an update! Secondly - this and the last chapter continue to draw on dynamics: Family dynamics vs a far more intimate dynamic as read here. doesn't let you copypaste anymore, so I have to just jot notes. Enjoyed Maura luring Jane into the bathroom and then basically calling Jane out on her 'wants'. The best friend/soon to be lover dialogue is both sweet and charming and sultry. Jane better be rid of her inhibitions now, become an eager learner, and when Echo is born, and after a needed bit of recovery time, better be ready to have her world rocked in return! It isn't the promise of a good love scene or two that draws me to your stories (however that is a very nice bonus) it is that you write them in a believable way with very 'real' dialogue. You paint a lovely vision for your readers to enjoy. Please continue soon and I'm already in line for the sequel!