|Reviews for Elephants|
| ttandme69 chapter 33 . 2/2
| davislp chapter 33 . 2/2
Omg, I love this chapter! And not because it is INSANELY hot and sexy. Love the way you started to bring together all these strings of Jane's anxiety together and address them. And the return of the starfish metaphor? Beautifully done. Thank you so much, as always.
| Miched8 chapter 33 . 2/1
Just found your story and I love Love LOVE it! Looking forward to the next update.
| EL chapter 33 . 2/1
Firstly - YAAAAAAAYYYYY an update! Secondly - this and the last chapter continue to draw on dynamics: Family dynamics vs a far more intimate dynamic as read here. doesn't let you copypaste anymore, so I have to just jot notes. Enjoyed Maura luring Jane into the bathroom and then basically calling Jane out on her 'wants'. The best friend/soon to be lover dialogue is both sweet and charming and sultry. Jane better be rid of her inhibitions now, become an eager learner, and when Echo is born, and after a needed bit of recovery time, better be ready to have her world rocked in return! It isn't the promise of a good love scene or two that draws me to your stories (however that is a very nice bonus) it is that you write them in a believable way with very 'real' dialogue. You paint a lovely vision for your readers to enjoy. Please continue soon and I'm already in line for the sequel!
| guest00 chapter 1 . 1/31
I await your next chapter with quite restrained joy. Thus I Ramble on. Sorry. Write, Write! Write-on.
| lovemygreygirls chapter 33 . 1/31
WOW! That was intense...Thanks.
| planenutty chapter 33 . 1/31
Wow. Wonderful. Thank you.
| Terri411 chapter 33 . 1/30
I'm sorry I'm the guest just a few mins ago got logout this chapter it
was the best in the story thank you :)))
| Guest chapter 33 . 1/30
OMG this was the best chapter of this story.I love this story you write them so good
just want to read it all the time please up-date soon PLEASE thank you :))))
| xletitshinex chapter 33 . 1/30
So beautiful...I teared up a little :')
| Mel chapter 33 . 1/30
Awesome chapter :)
| LiwNa chapter 33 . 1/30
Amazing chapter! Thank you!
| JoBethMegAmy. my homegirls chapter 33 . 1/29
Well, I don't really even know what to say (except that you almost got me to read some of your M-rated stuff...well done. It was tempting.) The lead-up to it was exceptional, and I love how their relationship works in this story. It's done with all the nuance, sincerity, trepidation and romance that is so sorely lacking (in any capacity) on the show itself. I'm glad Jane was finally able to explain herself, and I'm also glad Maura got pissed at first. I wasn't expecting that, and it worked perfectly - made total sense. You so own these two. And I dunno, in a lesser writer's hands, those last two lines wouldn't seem particularly profound, I don't think...but here, I swear my heart melted. That was gorgeous.
| j9tigger chapter 33 . 1/29
I was completely wrapped up in this chapter, in the tenderness and care Maura takes to make Jane feel safe.
| Funicello chapter 33 . 1/29
Good! Really, really, really good!