|Reviews for The Threshold of Salvation|
| Angelina Roongta chapter 1 . 2/11
| ValeriaAmity chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
| laurel-madness chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
oh i didn't need my heart to be in one piece today thanks
| FantasyWisher chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Hey it's Crista. I loved good. Definitely some inspiration. And do we really walk alone when there are other people who walk the same path?
| thefabulouskatie chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
I absolutely love the beginning, and then you kind of lost me in the middle, and I simply adore the end. So yeah, it's a little confusing, but the good kind of confusing, if that makes any sense. Now reading back through it, the middle section (beginning with the first mention of shadows, I think) makes more sense because I know how it ends. It's beautifully written. I think it's just one of those pieces that you have to read over and over again to get all the little facets. And people are lazy. One thing I would add is a bit more description of where she is. I know you mention that she's near the Chasm, but I took that as a mental nearness (does that make sense?) on the first read-through. Maybe that's just me, but I was mostly confused because I didn't know where she was. Again, this is a beautiful piece.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
| Every Roses' Thorn chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Wow. This is seriously one of the most amazingly written fictions I have ever read. Amazing.
| divergentfangirls chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
What just happened?!