Reviews for Part Two of The Tender Trap
betwixtful chapter 18 . 9/11/2014
okay i don't think these two are going to get together by the end of this part of the story. but being honest with each other, and finally meeting up is enough for me. i don't understand what the shredder's intention is with wanting to see leonardo. but perhaps it's alright to say he won't hurt him. great chapter and i can't wait to read the next one.
betwixtful chapter 17 . 9/11/2014
despite leonardo wanting to obey splinter's dying wish, it's nice raphael accepts him and karai. if only splinter could somehow change his mind. but so much has happened. and i liked reading karai's reaction to oroku saki being alive and having got away. hopefully thing will become less complicated for leonardo and karai.
betwixtful chapter 16 . 9/10/2014
wow, i just don't even know what to say. the conflicts in this story are so difficult on the turtles and i really feel for them. i really want leonardo and karai to get together but splinter dying, and his dying wish, is really something.
betwixtful chapter 15 . 9/10/2014
i just realized how emotionally tired reading this story has made me. but i want to know what's going to happen next. i really just glad everyone is going to make it out okay. when leonardo and karai do get to speak to one another i know it's going to be great and worth the build up to it.
betwixtful chapter 14 . 9/10/2014
i'm so glad the part of the story with this level of intensity is over. i could tear me eyes away from the screen. i'm so glad everyone made it out alive, and in a way mostly alright. i want to see leonardo and karai interact. but mostly i'm just glad they're okay. it's a bittersweet sort of anticipation i have for them to have their first real conversation in two years.
betwixtful chapter 13 . 9/10/2014
i always stopped myself from going straight to the next chapter because i wanted to leave you a review. but i had to go straight to chapter fourteen to know if karai was raped or not. that they're seeking revenge for marcus brokker, and lena is expecting him to become a strong leader, does that mean later on in the story we'll be seeing him? that's be interesting. your own characters that you've developed for the story are so great. it made me realize i didn't even think of them as OCs. they're so well-written, and so well integrated into the story. and if i'm not being too presumptive, marcus brokker becoming an enemy of karai's would be an interesting take of the vindictiveness perpetuating in this story.
betwixtful chapter 12 . 9/10/2014
okay please let that be as dark as this story is going to get. i was so apprehensive of what would happen to april and karai. but i'm hoping the guy's are going to save them before venom follows through with their revenge. and then leonardo and karai can be together. they've been through so much, they deserve it.
betwixtful chapter 11 . 9/10/2014
so is this about the boy that forced himself of karai when she went to that boarding school/training center in japan? and if so very anxious about the "disturbing and dark material" in the next chapter. please let leonardo and his brothers make it in time.
betwixtful chapter 10 . 9/10/2014
well that scene definitely stood out. i'm not normally into fighting scenes and i was reading that scene where donatello and casey were fighting intently. reading what donatello was like when he was in a rage was interesting. this story really pushes the limits of several characters, and it keeps you quite engrossed in the story.
betwixtful chapter 9 . 9/10/2014
i liked how leonardo empathized with the position donatello was in and understood he would have done the same in his position. leonardo's such a nice person, but at the same time he has his demons. and that splinter's one major flaw, as far as i can tell, is his blinding fury when he's trying to protecting his family. finally i liked the ending line. karai has some honor to her. and how she casually realized she couldn't say leonardo's name. that it was too painful? again, great chapter. if you haven't noticed from my reviews, i'm hooked.
betwixtful chapter 8 . 9/10/2014
i'm just staring at the screen after everything that happened in this chapter. casey's going to ask the turtles for help and they'll find karai and april. and then! leonardo and karai can see one another again. at least that's what i think is going to happen. great chapter.
betwixtful chapter 7 . 9/10/2014
what a great moment to reveal what karai asked donatello to tell leonardo. i hope leonardo isn't too mad at him. and i see why the shredder has a perspective in this story with the german immigrants possibly being part the foot's rival clan. such a good idea. very well-written. i was reading this chapter so intently. i'm split- i want to get to the end to know everything that happens but i also want to story to keep going.
betwixtful chapter 6 . 9/10/2014
that's an interesting way of tying casey into story, and having him cross paths with karai. this rival clan of the foot's sounds interesting. and creative! cool idea. and i don't know what's going to happen. i'm a little anxious but also excited to find out.
betwixtful chapter 5 . 9/10/2014
i'm so glad karai's back in new york! and i didn't think leonardo would realize he still believed karai. though i did think it was more possible he would accept that he loved her and probably always will. i can't even take how much i'm anticipating them meeting up again.
betwixtful chapter 4 . 9/10/2014
i don't blame donatello for wanting to be done with pursuing april and thinking there's a chance with her. i understand april's apprehension about being with a mutant and what life they would have together, and i'm interested to read more about that.
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