Reviews for The Secret in the Sand
luckywynner86 chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Heartbreaking and almost bittersweet, I like it.
leshagen chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
That was really sad, and depressing...but beautifully written. All I can say is that I hope their relationship is not irreparably changed. Thanks for the story. Think I'll go and cry now.
threesquares chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Ooooh, grim. But you said what...well, I don't know about "we all" but certainly I...fear. And said it very very well. Thank you. I especially like knowing how everyone at the lab reacted. Angela popping up everywhere was great. Wonderful. M.
pasha54 chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Boy, I hear you. Pelant has taken it to a whole new level when he starts to tear apart the BB relationship. You start eroding that trust...
mychakk chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
very ...bitter. But I liked it. It fits with the finale and express the feelings it evoked. Thank you for sharing this with us.
gnbrules chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Sadness. Really nicely written sadness, but yep. Great work, let me just go crawl under some sand now.
JessDB chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
You're "being sand" Love the story :)