Reviews for Wandering Lovers
SabHohl chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
*Low moan* Oh my god.
That was amazing. Hot, not smutty, but passionate and you can just feel the love and compassion between them. Beautiful.
The way you incorporated them not wanting to cause the other to beg, that was stunning, it has a nice undertone to it that's deep and saddening and you can understand the meaning clear enough.
Kudos to you, if I could give you an audience of applause, you would receive an standing ovation.
Mighty Agamemnon chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
This was very good! Smutty yet so in character! They're both so cute and it's good you reminded us that they did do some pretty horrible things to each other in the past. Just a tiny critiscm, the "r"s were a bit overdone. Other than that, great stuff!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Your writing is magnificent! I loved this story.