|Reviews for Potentia Amoris|
| Tony chapter 23 . 5/14
Wow! Just finished reading it all and this is so good. T Hoping that you come back at some point! Until then I'll have to re read it!
| Ringlord7 chapter 23 . 4/1
this was really cool but there was of course also some fun moments like when Pyrrhus grabbed a helmet to smack a guy. Pheros vs. Cordelia was amazing and i'm really looking forward to the next chapter however long it may be until it's released
| Dragonkillz chapter 23 . 3/31
Just finish reading ch 1-23 and your additional chapters, all i can say is that I Love it. The fact that you wrote all this and making very enjoyable that i wish that it will continue. I don't know if you have dropped it or just life is taking you away, either way its a fantastic read and i hope you can finish it.
Also i like how you deepened most of the characters and the story as a whole, and personally hoping that the transition for Pyrrhus from General to Grand Master will be a big event on some sort, probably won't happen until the defeat of Walhart or Yen'fay
| Gallian Squad 7 chapter 1 . 2/9
Just wanted to write this.
My own story has been running for a few months now and I'm only 18 reviews to the 100 mark, and I must say that this fic really started it all. I found this story about 14-15 months ago and just read it before leaving my first review as a guest. Then, after reading it again, I decided to write my own and it's been well received, but I always come back to this for examples of characters, writing structure, and use of plot points to help me through my writer's block at times.
What I mean to say is thank you, thank you so much for really inspiring me to take the ideas I held and write them for the world. I know you're busy and probably won't see this review for quite some time, but I wanted to say you are the standard I wish to reach in my own writing one day and I hope that this wonderful story will continue until all is said and done.
I don't know which will finish first honestly, yours or mine, but I look forward to the ride ahead and I wish you the best of luck! (Also, a review by you would by the greatest honor I could possibly gain as you are the BEST writer in this section IMO, I don't ask this as soliciting to gain a greater fanbase or anything like that, just your honest opinion and criticism is more than enough.)
Thank you again, and have a wonderful time!
| robotortoise chapter 23 . 2/3
A fantastic story, full of really sweet romance and surprisingly good characterization for Cordelia, Severa, and Morgan.
I'll admit, I was put off at first that you gave MU another name besides Robin, but I liked how you chose a name from history. That was pretty clever.
I really like the character's conversations, like when Sumia, Chrom, and Cordelia all forced Phyrrus into a double date. That was pretty great!
| Dart Emmeron chapter 10 . 12/10/2015
Fire Emblem is one of my favorite games of all time, and I love this fan-fiction so much! From the bottom of my heart, thank you so much for writing this beautiful piece. You talk about how the explicit romantic scenes make you uncomfortable? Well I must admit, they are my favorite part of your writing! PLEASE do not shy away from this. For me, the reason why I read this is because I love the Avatar/Cordelia relationship. I personally would love to see you explore further done the path of romance. I am not saying that I want this masterpiece to turn into something comparable to 50 Shades of Grey, gods no, but I also would never want to see it avoided! That would break my heart. I am very invested in your writing. Please let me know if there is anyway I can help support this. Also, I know this may be a shot in the dark, but, if you have any questions about what I said or would like to contact me about anything you can contact me at . I have written a few short stories myself and am really inspired by your own writing! I'd love to get the chance to talk to you, if you'd take the time. However I understand you must be busy writing this great story.
Christopher Robert Nathan Hunt
| Arkblade529 chapter 23 . 10/18/2015
Absolutely love this series! Cord&Avatar is my favorite pairing and you definately give it justice. You also give a lot of personality and uniqueness to characters that i thought were somewhat bland. Moar plz :P
| Novaclysm chapter 3 . 10/7/2015
"I love it when a plan comes together"
Did you just-
Did you just reference Lux from League?
| Natzo chapter 23 . 8/8/2015
Well, the leaders that betrayed the League should eventually be tried for treason by the winners and have their lands and powers taken, if not executed.
| The Manic Magician chapter 23 . 7/23/2015
Amazing story, amazing characterizations. Keep up the excellent work. :)
| pkmn2112 chapter 2 . 7/22/2015
Nice! I personally pair the Avatar and Cordelia. They make a deadly team in the game and I really like the proposal scene, it really feels like Cordelia becomes completely enamored with him. Not to mention I like how the Avatar implies that he has come to fall in love with her over the course of their meetings. Long story short, I approve. As for the story itself, it is very well written. Honestly if you keep up the way you've been going I can't see Severa being too much trouble. I don't know how many of Severa's supports you have seen, but she is actually a very good person. Anyway, great work, i look forward to reading more!
| Spiner909 chapter 23 . 7/17/2015
I absolutely love this story and the way you've portrayed Cordelia and Pyyrhus. I hope we get to see more of Morgan's sillyness in the future _
| FrozenBlast13 chapter 23 . 7/13/2015
Great Chapter. I really think you did a great job with Pyrrhus' personality with that part with when he only gave himself 3 seconds to freak I could truly imagine him doing that. I think you even did a great job with Pheros and her crush. Anyway Great Chapter
| Johnny chapter 8 . 7/10/2015
Frederick probably ran away like Sonic after seeing that moment. gg
| Dead Pann chapter 8 . 7/8/2015
Cordelia was crying for THREE YEARS? Pyrrhus, you horrible man!