this is a great story until this chapter... rin is nothing no youkai would want her as she is a lowly human... even with the potion she brings nothing into a relationship... she can't defend herself and putting her into studies is more than stupid... there is no need for her to learn anything other than how to be village wife... at least Kagome is a miko though you keep her pathetically weak.

females of that time era were not worth anything... they were basically sold, they had no say her best option would be a geisha... and if a youkai did mate her they wouldn't breed her... so why bother keeping it around...

Shippo and rin would not be heirs to anything they are not blood so they cannot be much of anything within the courts...

"Something 'a-wicked', this way comes!"

Sesshomaru (Arwen) to Kagome (AragornI would rather spend one Lifetime with you, than to face all the Ages of this World alone,"

I'm a little disappointed it just ended. You're story just jumped to far for me. A small sequel would be nice. Even with the gap, Snow Angel is one of my favorite stories of yours.

My top favorite is " She Who the Prophecy Foretold". Then "Manage Au Inu" is second favorite. I keep waiting for you to finish both of them. I'll keep you in my prayers to help you with whatever you need. Just so your happy and maybe using your talents.

Sad but well written.

Sad

Lemon time?

Inuyasha's mating, yes I can see it.

Wonderful work. You put a smile on my face. I like how you made Seiko the palace painter. Well done.

I like the rabbit, the nannies and even Lucky. But there's something about Seiko and his artistic talents, I really like.

Wonderful Work. Thank you for the story and all you're time.

Nice

I liked that Kagura is well and staying with Kagome. Maybe you can make Kagura Lucky's nanny. If she feels the needs to punish herself for what he made her do. Being Lucky's nanny would be punishment, I think.

Nicely written

I knew the wolfing would show up. But where's the other two? Just the "where's my woman" wolf is here. I really never liked Kouga. He is so caring about his dead men. But isn't nice to the twins with him, everyday. You have him will written.

Well written and you did get a bath in, too. A must have with Kagome.