|Reviews for Topsy-Turvy|
| Twiggalina chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
What a sweet oneshot!
| LMBB chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
I think you've been in my teenage sons room. It's revolting and you described it very well. Ick. I try to stay out but every once in a while a mom has to TRY to clean it up.
This was fun and sweet and sad too. Thanks for sharing.
| VeCha chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Really good oneshot! You portrayed Bella's nervousness about her situation pretty well, and we really could feel how it affected Edward through the words you chose. Overall, great job! :)
| Loveforgreeneyes chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Nice. Thank you. Stephanie
| michelle0526 chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Loved it! Always happy to see an alert from you. Would love a continuation of this story!
| Erroneous78 chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Thinking someone's got really pretty eyes and liking the way her lips turn sort-of-purple after eating a red, white, and blue turbo rocket popsicle and thinking she's a hell of a wall-ball player aren't exactly the stuff of Shakespearean sonnets.
I thought that was beautiful. I really don't know how you do it. You have this incredible knack af being able to write a story which can easily be left where it is but leaves your readers screaming for more.
I love how you're not afraid to take Edward and make him into a whole different kind of Edward. An Edward who isn't full of himself, isn't cocky, is just a boy at the end of the day.
I loved this Edward. Still so innocent but raised right by his mama.
I love your stories. So much.
| happyhippy chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Haha that was amazing! Thankyou! I have nevernreally been one for one shots,but I really love your stories!
| GorGirl chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Thanks for your story - loved it!
| Eeyorefan12 chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Oh my God, how do you do this? You just crank out a little one-shot like its no big deal while I find myself devouring it as if it's a full-length novel and wishing it was the first in a series. What a great "little" story and what fun, sweet characters. Topsy-Turvy has brightened my day and gone into my favorites list without a moment of hesitation from me. So, um, about that series...
| 2muchtrouble chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
That was a treat to read.
| Siobhan Whitlock chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
That was awesome, I loved it!
| Anton M chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Cool characters with an authentic feel to them. Nerdy-real Edward and worried-ambitious Bella. I have to mention, I'd just thought the other day that I don't think I've actually read (m)any stories where Bella gets an abortion. It has left the impression that everyone's quite anti-abortion.
I immensely enjoyed this story! Thank you so much.
| Discordia81 chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
That was a really fabulous story about a not-so-easy subject. I truly loved it. It was a roller-coaster and I really had no idea where you were going to go with it. Loved their history together, loved how real and vulnerable Bella seemed. Loved Edward sweet dorkiness and his offer to stand beside her if she had to tell Charlie.
I just ... loved every single second of it and want you to know you did a lovely job with it. 3
| jansails chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
What a cute story!
Edward was adorable & oh-so-chivalrous IMO.
I think Bella's back on the right track.
| beckysue999 chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
They're really still kids...
And am I weird for thinking I want my 16 year-old daughter, and 13 and 14 year old sons to read this, even if it means outing myself to them as a fanfic fan? Although they'll never look at rocket Popsicles in the same way...