Reviews for The One That Got Away
snow eopard chapter 6 . 7/25/2013
someones in trouble
itsblackandwhite chapter 6 . 7/25/2013
Lmao oh god! Calling dad to get u outta jail! Priceless! Can't wait for more of the drama to ensue!
pece87 chapter 6 . 7/25/2013
So is the baby Embry's? Hmmmm didn't Jake make sure Embry took Lizzie home at the bonfire or something like that?
Hahaha moonshine? Crazy *ss girls!
Oh gosh when is Bella and Jake gonna get it on? Lol
sassy973 chapter 6 . 7/25/2013
Lol I love it...update soon
VJM130899 chapter 5 . 7/20/2013
tht was awsum
I just cnt stop readin but had 2 since there were only 5 chps

so luv ya
n shall wait 4 more updates
best of luk with the stry

cnt wait 4 more *rubbing my hand together*

3 :)
kristeejo chapter 5 . 7/19/2013
I Love where your story is at cant wait to read the next chapter
Jamie chapter 5 . 7/18/2013
This story is REALY Amazing
i hope you keep up the greatness
orionfoo chapter 5 . 7/18/2013
Omg, he has gone a little crazy.
snow eopard chapter 5 . 7/18/2013
crap that intense
Nyx Farsiris chapter 5 . 7/18/2013
I was excited to see a fic that wasn't a Bella & Edward one, but I love Nash and I don't want her to end up with Jake.
Grumpy DelSan13 chapter 5 . 7/18/2013
dun dun dun What will Bella say to that? Oh great job please update ASAP PLEASE
sassy973 chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
Love it update soon
chinadoll381282001 chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
Okay so he wants her right? So what about the other girl? Is he saying he's going to drop that girl to get back with Bella or does he mean he still wants the other girl but also wants to keep Bella on the side?
pece87 chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
Oh yes, I'm glad I found this story! I love the aggressive Jake.
Bella definitely is in a dilemma even though I know who I would pick ;) heehee!
I am a little confused though, he only wants her but then he isn't around. He better step up his game and kick that Lizzie girl to the curb!
Oh and why would he question if the baby Lizzie is carrying is his or not? Just being a d*oche of a man or an upcoming plot twist?
What happens next! What happens next!?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
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