|Reviews for Higher|
| twifan74 chapter 12 . 8/10
Love this story!...although instead if Edward I'm picturing Donnie walhburg from New kids on the block! Lol. Great story though!
| CoffeeScript chapter 4 . 6/6
Well well, Emmett likes Bella, Rosalie likes Emmett, Bella likes Edward, Edward likes Bella and the other two can go all AOL lovey-dovey! MY GOODNESS! I LOVE THIS STORY!
| CoffeeScript chapter 8 . 6/6
This is currently my favorite chapter! .Fuck! You go Bella girl! Slay that motherfucker of hers! hahaha!
I guess I can relate to her at some point and those words uttered by Bella to her mom?! Wow, I wanted to do that for a long time without crying or getting scared of the mom. But this chapter is so well written that I'm really feeling her rage towards her mother! Each words is like a cut to her throat only if she's listening! Haha! I hope Bella will never go back to their house again. I fear something bad will happen to her because of that bastard Phil.
I am moved! Really moved by this chapter!
| pesuasion chapter 40 . 5/10
That ending was so satisfying. I had a blast reading it! It got me through a really hard day, THANK YOU.
| kadronya chapter 40 . 5/10
I love it!
| aurora0509 chapter 40 . 1/11
I Liked the story. I am from NJ and born in 73 so it was funny to hear all the 90's talk. I tried to picture 59th street gojng to 4th and at least now don't think it is a bad area or there are apartments so if it was there guess things have changed. But it was fun trying to picture some of the areas as I was reading them. The only thing I didn't like was Edward shooting someone. That put a bad taste in my mouth at their happy ending. Otherwise, great story
| Alpha22 chapter 40 . 10/31/2015
I enjoyed reading your story. I felt the love of your characters they have fire each other. The intensity did take me higher! I believed the setting, scenarios, emotion... This is a well-written story. Thank you.
| Guest chapter 26 . 8/27/2015
Oh, I forgot to add controlling. Yep, super controlling. And anger issues. You have set up Edward to be the perfect candidate for dishing out spousal abuse. Let's hope Edward straightens up soon!
| Guest chapter 25 . 8/27/2015
Ughhhhhh...Edward is really passing me off. He's a possessive ass in this fic. I'm trying to like him, really I am but I would have dumped his ghetto ass along time ago. He just needs to grow up and grow some class and get out of the drug trade and go back to English class and learn to speak properly. The story is intriguing but again so hard for me to read these characters so OOC. Your writing is great and you have obviously done your research where hood rats are concerned but man... I don't know. This Edward character is really hard to take. But I just can't move along to another story because it is so well written and frankly I just want to see how you resolve this story and where you take these two.
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/25/2015
It's weird I am liking the story, but I am having a very hard time with the characters. They all seem like poor decision making thugs. I just can't seem to accept the twilight characters in that position. Trying to find the inherent good in them but they seem so far removed from what they are normally like in FF. I think on one hand that is part of the appeal and yet it is just so difficult. I find myself cringing when they say and do certain things.I think...how is this all going to get turned around and they become the upstanding, caring citizens the usually are? Maybe they won't is the answer. Only you know, we'll and others who have already read this, but in reality...someone would overdose and die. Someone would go to jail again màybe, someone would contract something really bad and the rest would end up Crack hoes. Yeah, your writing is great but this one is just gritty and hard. That's not a negative review by the way. You have just gone in a way that most dont, which can be a very good thing, my brain is just having trouble unraveling it all.
| VeThena chapter 40 . 6/24/2015
Lovely story. Makes you wanna fall in love again.
Thank you for sharing it.
| la-geologia chapter 40 . 5/26/2015
Oh god, that was the most perfect ending to a perfect story! I LOVED IT. Loved absolutely every second of this fantastic fic! Sweet, sexy, and hilarious, this story had everything. And I got such a kick out of this Bella. Thugward was hot as hell, and I melted for his sweet, loving side, but this Bella just completely cracked me up. She was too freaking funny, I just adored her. Wish she was real so we could get a couple drinks, giggle our heads off, and go dancing! :D ..One of my favourite parts of the story was also totally Bella's outfits! I usually hate clothing descriptions in fic, but you completely make it work in a way that makes sense and lets me feel like I'm getting to know her character better through hate sense of style and not just reading about her outfit. Plus, it was so much fun to read a fic that completely perfectly captured the time and place it was set in. I've never been to New York, but I feel like I have such a sense of the place and neighbourhoods from your stories. You're a great writer, and the 1994 flair was spot on! I loved that so much. When Bella got her nails done and her cornrows? Too fucking cute! lol. I totally remember my sister rocking some white girl cornrows, too! Haha :) ... Anyway, sorry for all the yammering. This review probably doesn't even make much sense, but all the best stories make me fic drunk and lead to dumb, incomprehensible reviews. ;-) BUT I LOVED IT! Thank you for sharing this with us. I know it's going to be one of those stories I read again and again.
| la-geologia chapter 12 . 5/26/2015
In all my years of fic reading I've never ever reviewed halfway through a story, I always wait until the end.. But I just couldn't wait this time, I needed to flail right freaking now because I am just ABSOLUTELY LOVING THIS fic! Good god, it's just so so good! I've always been a fan of yours, but your writing just continues to blow me away with this story. Every word, every scene just always seems so REAL! More than any other author out there, every bit of your dialogue is always 100% believable, like I'm sitting there listening to a real conversation. I love it! You and HollettLA make such a great team. Thank you so much to both of you for all your hard work, and thank you for sharing your amazing stories with us. I can't wait to dive back in and see what's going to happen next! :) xoxo ...Oh, and also this Edward is sexy as allllll hell! YOWZA! ;-)
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
Fave, fave FAVE story! Please don't ever remove it
| Capricorn75 chapter 3 . 3/2/2015
Rereading this fic because I love it so much.