Reviews for Child of Heaven |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I remember this fic reading when I was a kid... Thank god I favourited it.. thank you for writing this in the ocean of boring natsuxlucy fairytaill fics. I also like Yuri please tell me if you have good fics to recommend |
![]() ![]() ![]() Phantom lord? What? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Probably one of the most solid fics I have read on this site. A definite favorite of mine. Was engaged for every second of this, the mc is handled really well and personally is just really enjoyable to read about. Idk man, I just had so much fun reading this that it barely felt like 800k words. Cool plots (I love me some spying, and some fake betrayal) and fun use of ocs/minor chars like Totomaru. Love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't get it.. Are you a tilde instead of an apostrophe to look cool or something? Dunno why but it drives me nuts when I try to read this. Like it has some weird spacing problems. Especially if you download it in epub format. Youre looks much different than You're. Like they're two separate words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() when's the oc going to start having her own scenes instead of stealing them all from existing characters? |
![]() ![]() amogus |
![]() ![]() See now...me personally I could never have a Dark and or Evil version of myself. We'd honestly be chilling together. I feel like the problem with Eve is that she's too emotional and they keep getting interrupted. They need a Real and true Heart to heart with no outside interference in order to settle this properly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() also... a sword that nullifies magic would be a great weapon to have... if she ever actually did that instead of blocking kt with a shield everytime. prob would make fights go better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() didn't recognize you... huh... TAKE THE MASK OFF THEN! it's hardly erzas fault. honestly, aside from the amount of things that her wearing a mask is making unplausible , I'm enjoying the fic. but if your going to make your character wear a mask, you should find a way to write the things your putting jn the story work with it, instead of just acting like it's not there for certain things |
![]() ![]() ![]() also she should only be like.. 12 or 13 I'm pree sure |
![]() ![]() ![]() this ... frankly weird kiss... shouldn't of happened.. she said she still wears her mask, and there was no mention of it comming off at all |
![]() ![]() ![]() A GREAT STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it been a wild ride but god damn dose this bring tear to my eyes... thank for the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, another fic that wants to stick to the story no matter fucking what. Great, now i dont have to watch the anime a second time. |
![]() ![]() Excellent I’m glad things are properly beginning to pick up now. I only wonder why Gajeel was taking so long with that job since his fight technically got stolen from him?! |