I remember this fic reading when I was a kid... Thank god I favourited it.. thank you for writing this in the ocean of boring natsuxlucy fairytaill fics. I also like Yuri please tell me if you have good fics to recommend

Phantom lord? What?

Probably one of the most solid fics I have read on this site. A definite favorite of mine. Was engaged for every second of this, the mc is handled really well and personally is just really enjoyable to read about. Idk man, I just had so much fun reading this that it barely felt like 800k words. Cool plots (I love me some spying, and some fake betrayal) and fun use of ocs/minor chars like Totomaru. Love!

I don't get it.. Are you a tilde instead of an apostrophe to look cool or something? Dunno why but it drives me nuts when I try to read this. Like it has some weird spacing problems. Especially if you download it in epub format. Youre looks much different than You're. Like they're two separate words.

when's the oc going to start having her own scenes instead of stealing them all from existing characters?

amogus

See now...me personally I could never have a Dark and or Evil version of myself. We'd honestly be chilling together. I feel like the problem with Eve is that she's too emotional and they keep getting interrupted. They need a Real and true Heart to heart with no outside interference in order to settle this properly.

also... a sword that nullifies magic would be a great weapon to have... if she ever actually did that instead of blocking kt with a shield everytime. prob would make fights go better.

didn't recognize you... huh... TAKE THE MASK OFF THEN! it's hardly erzas fault. honestly, aside from the amount of things that her wearing a mask is making unplausible , I'm enjoying the fic. but if your going to make your character wear a mask, you should find a way to write the things your putting jn the story work with it, instead of just acting like it's not there for certain things

also she should only be like.. 12 or 13 I'm pree sure

this ... frankly weird kiss... shouldn't of happened.. she said she still wears her mask, and there was no mention of it comming off at all

A GREAT STORY!

it been a wild ride but god damn dose this bring tear to my eyes... thank for the story.

Man, another fic that wants to stick to the story no matter fucking what. Great, now i dont have to watch the anime a second time.

Excellent I’m glad things are properly beginning to pick up now. I only wonder why Gajeel was taking so long with that job since his fight technically got stolen from him?!