|Reviews for Child of Heaven|
| Critical Guest chapter 65 . 7h
Excellent I’m glad things are properly beginning to pick up now. I only wonder why Gajeel was taking so long with that job since his fight technically got stolen from him?!
| Critical Guest chapter 27 . 3/27
Bad news is you definitely need(ed) a spellchecker at some places. Your tenses seem to be okay though.
Good news is that the MC is not ridiculously over powered (yet?) as she’s gotten her butt kicked several times before something or someone comes in and saves/stops the fight. I know some stories struggle to balance things (Fairy Tail already struggles with power balancing). I know she’s said to be strong but so far she hasn’t really did anything of note.
Also it is interesting providing another POV from someone other than the main cast. It’s great that you’re covering the gaps that the anime doesn’t mention and that it’s not a straight rehash of the plot.
Honestly Eve is passive at best and barely the main character in her own story. The beginning starts with her finding out she has magic (and is literally given a magic book) then she gets kidnapped and forgets she has magic? She may have been a kid but she didn’t even attempt to use it. There’s no mention of it. Then she’s free to tell everyone what happened— oh wait she doesn’t. She leaves Erza alone, doesn’t try tracking down her sister, all she does is settle in a guild and get famous!
I thought she would remember who Kagura was and put the pieces together (“oh yeah I know your brother”) that way but literally nothing happened. There was no revelation and Kagura was gone with no fanfare. Idk if you’re “sowing the seeds” of friendship for later on or what, but so far I highly doubt it given the MC’s poor memory issues and failure to do anything.
I genuinely hope this gets better bc it is interesting. It’s just incredibly frustrating to watch the MC go through the story without trying to change anything. For now I will continue reading.
| Terastrasza chapter 13 . 3/22
I hate it when fics feel they have to stick religiously to canon, like why the hell isn't she telling anyone about the tower? Unlike Erza she wasn't threatened with her friends lives, but no, the whole thing is forgotten because "cannon". Also, unlike Erza she already had magic but didn't use it at all to escape. At least Rob had the excuse that he was too old to survive using magic. MC is far to passive.
| xehsous2 chapter 8 . 2/22
I still dont know if Eve was a girl or a guy in her past life
| BlaxkWater chapter 278 . 2/6
This was beautifully written and the end while not perfect could beat the endings of anime that had entire teams to write
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/4
Do you visit Wikia/Fandom? If you do how about you visit Wiki like the Love Interest Wikia, Shipping Wikia, The Fanon Shipping Wikia etc. Wikia is also called Wiki due to Wikia is a Wiki like Wikipedia is Wiki.
| BlaxkWater chapter 103 . 1/29
shame on you for taking this away from juvia
| BlaxkWater chapter 1 . 1/28
how unlucky to be in a shooting in Canada if I recall there has been 28 EVER in Canadas history
| Aedwards179 chapter 152 . 1/13
Hopefully its like a natsu situation where they can destroy it so she doesn't turn into a demon
| Aedwards179 chapter 146 . 1/13
I really hope she doesn't grow horns and shit. this is the kind of thing that ruins fanfics for me. like in Naruto fanfics where he ends up. growing fox ears and tails for no god damn reason.
| Aedwards179 chapter 84 . 1/12
Holy shit she's gonna be gildarts daughter
| mironovaleksandr1997 chapter 272 . 12/18/2022
Cool Irene vs Acnology
| Aedwards179 chapter 70 . 10/13/2022
I want to see her actually fight all put but it feels like it's never going to fucking happen. seems like every fight she has she's injured, holding back for some reason, or is getting countered. I want to see her kick ass not get her ass kicked. that's the reason I stopped watching fairy tail in the first place. this is just adding a new character to the list of people getting their asses kicked every fight and saved by luck
| Aedwards179 chapter 64 . 10/13/2022
it seems all Eve is actually good for is blocking attacks that would've hit regular cast members
| Aedwards179 chapter 63 . 10/13/2022
eve is said to be strong, but she gets her ass kicked literally every single fight. I don't think she's finished a single one by herself.