Reviews for Two Little Lines
chapiggy chapter 7 . 12/10/2013
Thats so sad.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/10/2013
Aw, so sad ;,,( Love the Ed Sheeran though.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/9/2013
Oh man...
Kaitlin1198 chapter 6 . 7/8/2013
Ohh I can't wait for more this is good and I'm kinda worried now so yeah updaye
cheyowl chapter 7 . 7/9/2013
You made me cry
MilliniumLint chapter 7 . 7/9/2013
:(
MilliniumLint chapter 5 . 7/9/2013
but they already told alec they were pregnant im confused
sizzyherondale chapter 7 . 7/9/2013
update soon! that was soo sad! :(
boysinbooks chapter 6 . 7/9/2013
this is amazing! please update soon!
Dolly7542 chapter 6 . 7/8/2013
You son of a... NOOOO! Please don't kill the twinsies please. I'm begging you. Don't do this! :'( I just wanna take the time to say even though I don't want the twins to die that this is a well written, interesting, and amazing story written by a wonderful author. Keep em coming! ; )
cheyowl chapter 6 . 7/8/2013
Omg wtf
lizerb chapter 6 . 7/8/2013
oh crap ...
sizzyherondale chapter 6 . 7/8/2013
oh no! thats not good! i hope its nothing serious please update soon! good chapter!
SailorVegeta13 chapter 5 . 7/7/2013
You've put a space after almost every beginning quote. It looks a little sloppy since that violates traditional punctuation rules. Also, there are some capitalization errors.

The writing itself is good, other than the aforementioned errors. Sorry, but I don't gush about chapters when there are lots of mistakes in them. Please don't be offended; I'm just trying to help you make your story the best it can be.
SailorVegeta13 chapter 4 . 6/21/2013
Oooh, I love Sarah Dessen books! Having the women yell at Jace after Clary leaves is pretty realistic, and so is having the fathers fall asleep. I really liked this chapter, and I'd say more but I'd just end up typing generic stuff - which I really try not to do.
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