Reviews for Avery's Little Sister
Bob22 chapter 1 . 3/7
Do more
ZadArchie chapter 1 . 2/28
Just so you are aware, this story contains sexually explicit material, meaning it really should be rated MA. MA-rated content has not been permitted on this site since 2012, and therefore this story violates the Terms of Service we all agreed to when we first signed up. Not saying you can't write it, but saying that this is just not the place for it. There are plenty of other sites that would gladly take it, including but not limited to AdultFanFiction, DeviantArt, and AO3. You could also write a watered-down version that does not involve explicit scenes to keep this kosher with the site rules. Take all these suggestions into consideration as they will help you avoid ToS issues in the future. Please understand, I say what I say in the spirit of what this site is about; making good stories great, if not brilliant.

Best,
Zad
Critics United
A chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
Great
Trey chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
Loved the story have you considered doing a girl meets world story?
Joseph Fisher chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
If any type of bully starts picking,teasing,or putting their hands on you go tell a teacher or principal so that they'll stop being mean to you. signed:Joseph James Fisher.
android chapter 1 . 7/9/2016
Very sexy but aren't they virgin?
Cancer chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
My name is what this is
Michael chapter 1 . 6/17/2016
I liked the last paragraph the best
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2016
This Story Is Really True I Really Really Loved It it Maks My At Them Doing It of & Its Maks My Shaking & Twinkling my Eyes Is So in love Right Now . It Makes Me Wants To also Them To Hear Their Voices Monring How About to Girls in The Together let Me In There Pleases so I'll Can Give Them
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
please put more
Quinton 2016 chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
What the fuck that was awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2015
Awesome
True sage of six paths chapter 1 . 9/24/2015
Okay this went from normal to weird to WTF in just a couple of seconds. Seriously you do know that Chloe is like 9 right?
Bob smith chapter 1 . 8/22/2015
wouldn't this be considered child porn
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2015
wtf
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