Reviews for Avery's Little Sister
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4
I loveve your story, it was amazing reading about Chloe and Avery :)
critic chapter 1 . 4/4
what the fuck did i just read
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15
make more.
jackjames829 chapter 1 . 2/12
i like it but you need to fix your mistakes and error's there are quite a few you need read it carefully
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28
I
taylor davison chapter 1 . 1/23
i found it both erotic and dialogue lacked at times but i loved the story.i wish i could play that game with my sister(sadly shes straight)
The book critic chapter 1 . 1/13
OMG you are such a perv
RILEY COCKERHAM chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
THIS IS THE SEXIEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ I EVEN TOUCHED MYSELF TO IT AND I EVEN HAD AN ORGASM
SEXINATOR chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOO FUCKING HOT
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
This. Is. Awesome.
WTF chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
YOU FREAK EW WTF
person chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
WTF NO STOP
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Great! Give more chapters!
Ricky Lovejoy chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Very hot. I like how you made it sweet between them. There was a tenderness as well as the erotic. Good job.
At chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Awesome
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