|Reviews for Titans May Cry|
| Naosj chapter 20 . 6/3
It has been three years since your first chapter. If you are not willing to improve your grammar and style by now, you are not willing period.
| Naosj chapter 1 . 6/3
Welcome to run-on sentence hell, the fanfiction where the periods are made up, and the commas don't matter. But everyone has mentioned that already. I'm more hung up on the lack of tone. When you used repetitive language, especially the ones you've done by mistake, and don't vary the descriptors, the dialogue comes off as flat. Some writers pull off that plain journalism style of narration, but you're hardly Hemmingway at this point.
Still... this is an idea and the heart is there.
| darksquall03 chapter 77 . 1/6
| John chapter 2 . 8/21/2015
The story just seems like one big Dante wankage and a Raven fangirl fodder plot. All the titans are derailed for Dante to have a purpose to take over the entire force of the plot, Dante is quite simply a mary suish over powered god more than ever than from the games and almost no superhero/villain/divine force can stand against him not even the strongest of the powerful, It's really about Dante being OP bullshit and giving him non canon abilities and elevating him past his depicted powers from the canon games and nerfing everyone else around him.
But again, you have the Titans whorship him like Superman and Batman giving him ungodly plot relevance and versatility allowing him to do whatever he wants, your just as bad as Insieme per la vittoria who makes Dante completely and unbelievably infallible compared to other more op superheroes and anime protagonists. Considering the titans are about orderly peace, Dante is the ultimate chaos hedonist and rebel with no consequences towards his action. Robin would immediately call Batman who would inform Superman to handle him and Dante would lose in every way to Superman if they fought. Dante works only with mercenaries with similar goals and treats saving the world as a buisness, the titans are public world protectors who save the world for free and are noble.
So not only do you have everyone out of character, you shifted the rules of authority to Dante because he's too op for anyone to step up towards. Superboy prime is just like this depiction of Dante in this story and wtf raven? Why is she of all characters infactuated with someone who is just as bad as beast boy in being obnoxious yet not as pure hearted or noble?
| Dante chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
I like how the story is so far, but you should go back through and fix the spelling errors and grammar errors because most of the time when someone is talking, you can't tell when they end or begin.
| Axcek chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
If this isn't complete, then I hope you continue. Your stubbornness in writing eighty chapters and over one hundred thousand words despite having so few reviews (due to it being such an obscure crossover) is impressive!
:D Plus, it's good!
| Illusionary Sage chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Dude you need to work on sentance structure and making speech flow. its choppy and confusing.
| AskedForThis chapter 20 . 9/17/2013
Stop sayin too much please.
| saberdine chapter 74 . 8/12/2013
the crossover you have here is going to take a long time to build followers even if the story is written and that's because no one really does look for a DMC - TT crossover but then you have really really bad stories with like 500 followers just because its a Dragon Ball Z / Naruto crossover.
| KarmaNarma chapter 14 . 8/4/2013
You say shit waaaay to much, but awesome so far.
| Princess Unikitty chapter 59 . 7/25/2013
| MonkeyShinigami chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
I have only read the first chapter so far, so all my judgements are based on that fact.
First with criticizing: You have to work on your grammer and punctuation a bit.
Compliments: The story idea is great so far, and you have great determination, since you only have a handful of follows, favorites and reviews, yet your fanfic has more words and chapters than every one I have read so far.
Keep up the great work and keep learning. A person is always learning and improving.
| Princess Unikitty chapter 55 . 7/21/2013
| Princess Unikitty chapter 53 . 7/18/2013
another great chapter
| Princess Unikitty chapter 51 . 7/15/2013
another great chapter, though there's very little description and characterization. i'm noticing a lot of telling and not a lot of showing.