Reviews for Déjà vu no Jutsu |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I read this is back in ohh maybe 2017? That was 8 years ago. I was a tween then. 18 and a half years old felt so adult to me but I’m in my early 20s now. Natsumi is younger than me and running a whole clan TT I miss you Vixen. Wherever you are, hopefully not isekaied lol, I hope your happy doing what you love. |
![]() ![]() In the unwilling friend section it should be success not succession, and it's Uzushiogakure, it's just often called Uzu for short. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed the story, keep up the hard work |
![]() ![]() ![]() THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY, I LOVED IT SO MUCH! Rip Sakumo, Kenta, Natsumi's first sword from Sakumo, Sakumo's dogs, possibly Bat, Natsumi's kidney, etc. They will be loved and missed. I like how this story didn't delve too deep into Natsumi's grief because I don't think I would be able to stop my grieving as well if she didn't, I tend to take on the character's mindset or what I think how they think. Amazing story, loved it. Nothing like reading a story a decade old and it's still so amazing. I wonder what ever did happen to Kabuto? Maybe the other Uzumaki's that Jiraiya had a lead on. What about Jiraiya ad Tsunade's relationship? Still loved the story tho |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fiona, I hope you found your peace you wanted in death |
![]() ![]() ![]() I nearly forgot what happened. Like I was thinking that the kidnapping ending was really a good ending on Natsumi's part and I had something nagging at me that something bad DID happen during her kidnapping. It was Kenta's death...I still miss Kenta. I miss Sakumo too. I miss Komushi somewhat. I miss a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOOOOOOOOO KENTAAAAAAAAA NOOOOOOO HER POOR BABY WHY DO ALL OF THEM DIE? I LIKED SAKUMO AND HE DIED, I LIKED KENTA AND THEY DIED. LIKE PLEASEEEEEEEEEE WHYYYYYY |
![]() ![]() ![]() AYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE JULY EIGTH MY B-DAY! GATO DIED ON MY BIRTHDAY AND NATSUMI HAD HALLUCINATIONS AYEEEEEEEE DRUGGED FISH!1111 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ..."...but you owe me dango money." i can't even cry because i'm in class. this is heartbreaking...second naruto fanfic with sakumo dying on the MC. I've only read two fanfics where Sakumo was personally involved with the MC. Do you understand how I feel? We couldn't even wait until Natsumi's pregnancy? I frickin hate Danzo. This is pretty gruesome but you porbbaly should've killed Natsumi off with the Orochimaru fight, I could've grieved her once instead of grieving over Sakumo a second time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing |
![]() ![]() That fight scene with Orochimaru was amazing! I loved how you jumped right into it and I loved even more how you alternated between short snippets of action and thought process. It was so much fun to read. |
![]() ![]() This chapter was amazing, hilarious, and adorable. I’ve been absolutely loving the story so far, but getting all the different perspectives, especially when they differed from Natsumi’s own, or were colored by the knowledge (or lack) of her past life, was delicious. And just so much fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the most enjoyable components of stories like these is the climb in power. It’s shallow, sure, but something I find to be key to enjoying Naruto fanfic. The character learning and mastering chakra, jutsu, and combat in general is just fun to see evolve. Because of that, the crippling of the main character is something that I’ve found I am unable to move past (I have tried the last few chapters). Your character was going to struggle to remain relevant power wise already. Now, it is literally impossible. The MC is going to cap at the level of the weakest Jonin out there, literal fodder for Elite Jonin, much less the class of enemy ninja that pop up later. So at this point in the story she’s going to have to be regulated to a side chatacter that tries to be relevant through planning and pushing other characters to act. Which might have been an interesting story if it had started that way from the beginning, but this entire story (up until she was crippled) had the main character actively involved in the ongoing conflict and fights. So the change from “badass ANBU captain” to a literal cripple that is useless in fights is hard to swollow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Posting this at the beginning of the chapter: it seems like a very bad idea for her to become a jonin sensei at the moment. She is weakened. She is no better than a chunin right now. Not only can she not protect her team, but she has an active bounty and assassins after her. She cant even protect herself. She needs to stay village side and under protection until she gets to some level where she can protect herself. She should only take on a genin team as a jonin sensei if shes able to perform at a jonin level. Assuming she is ever able to get to that level with a heavily crippled chakra system. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this does not bode well. Her being permanently weakened is going to make stopping Madara’s plans very difficult. Hopefully she can eventually work her way back to at least Jonin level. She might never get to the Elite Jonin level now, much less Kage level, but she might can still influence events by being strategic. |