|Reviews for An Orange Fox's Justice|
| Kunoichi of the Moonlit Night chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Never read your original but this good so keep it up ;)
| OmegaTheMessiah chapter 2 . 7/23/2013
sasuke not evil? what was different from back then?
| ultima-owner chapter 2 . 7/8/2013
I hope Danzo gets dethroned epicly
| Rocker1600 chapter 2 . 7/8/2013
Great chapter; the only thing I can suggest is that you should try to slow the pace of the story down a little more.
| Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
mmm suup ,i like
| JAIMOL chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
A promising start. I'm wanting to know as continuous.
| Skykhanhunter chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Couple of points;
Firstly, the only negative here is a few spelling mistakes, but that's a minor issue.
On the plus side, good idea to bring Konan into the story from the get go. It flows well and is completely believeable.
In regards to changes from the first draft, I'd ask firstly that Naruto not don a mask as he did in the previous version. It's unnecessary. He need not make an appearence for a few chapters, but you could have him off doing other things.
All in all, I'm looking forward to reading what happens next.
| Rocker1600 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
This a good 1st chapter. I'm glad you expanded on the plot; this story has promise.