Reviews for Disease
dragonball256 chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Well this was pretty awesome.
MidnightAngel1095 chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Juleezy chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
ERMERGERD, you finally released something new! Ha, I recognized your name from reading some of your previous pieces. Anyway, there weren't really any terrible grammar issues. I think you just forgot a period or comma or something, but towards the end, it seemed like a sentence got cut off. WELL, I loved how short and sweet this oneshot was, but I felt like the ending was a little rushed or as if the transition towards the end was not smooth. I mean, I do like it, but something about the end still didn't completely satisfy me. However, overall as a whole, it was pretty good. Keep writing!