Reviews for You Don't See It?
d00m mar1ne chapter 25 . 6/14
i hope they have two kids a boy and girl pretty much the imaginery kids
The L. MMonster chapter 61 . 2/22
This was one wonderfully sweet story, and I adored every word of it.
The L. MMonster chapter 32 . 2/21
She could simply be Brianna Scherbatsky Stinson. It has a nice alliteration to it.
The L. MMonster chapter 5 . 2/20
I'm confused. In the show, it was very clear that Barney knew Robin couldn't have kids before they got married, when Robin and Barney's mom where having their scrambled eggs off and she made a comment about her grandchildren and Robin stormed off, Barney explained to her that Robin couldn't get pregnant. But here he doesn't know. That is just for the story or you didn't remember that that had happened..?
ValkyrieDefender chapter 61 . 7/31/2015
I just finished reading through what you have posted and I loved it! This is totally what should have happened in the finale of How I Met Your Mother! I too was disappointed with the writers on how it ended.
Swarkles forever!
BeneathTheUmbrella chapter 61 . 7/26/2015
Heehee. When it comes to babies, my biggest fear would be poop everywhere. I shudder to think. But you've put that grossness—and humour of it, because really, you always have to laugh rather than cry—here perfectly. And B/R getting cleaned up afterwards is a nice touch. :p A sweet chapter; can't wait for more!
Still Waters chapter 61 . 7/22/2015
You are on the mark again with ao many of these moments. Well done.
8srfan chapter 61 . 7/21/2015
Amazing, as always! I just love these two so much, and I can't wait to see where this goes next. Kudos once again!
SnowboundMermaid chapter 61 . 7/21/2015
Excellent job here, covering this many different aspects of Barney and Robin - the humor, the friendship, the sexuality and uncertainty, all adapting to this new phase of life.
McFlyandTwinkies chapter 9 . 7/13/2015
In the show Barney was the first person Robin told that she can't have kids, but in this he doesn't know.
8srfan chapter 60 . 7/7/2015
Took me a while, but I finally caught up to this story. And boy, it has been a perfect ride. I loved every single chapter, and I'm so glad I'm caught up now! I loved the parenting theme here, and it's really written in such a compelling and realistic way that makes it hard to look away when reading.

I've felt so spoiled, getting to read every chapter on such a short amount of time, now I have to get used to waiting haha! Will be anxiously waiting for the next updates :D
BeneathTheUmbrella chapter 60 . 7/4/2015
Lovely snippets of parenthood, indeed. Aw that last part was rough on poor Robin, but I hope she is assured soon. She's a good mom; Barney can convince her, but hope she realizes it herself too! Great job!
SnowboundMermaid chapter 60 . 7/4/2015
Love seeing these two adjust to parenthood their own way. Barney with Brianna on his chest is definitely worthy of record. The backwards tie, the RedBull on cereal, Robin giving up on the day,all realistic to parenthood and characters as well as their relationship.
Cybergirl chapter 60 . 7/2/2015
Wow, so many great updates in such a short period of time, you are spoiling us! Loved the chapter and that you are showing the nerv wrecking side of parenthood too. And especially barneys realization about people with babies and how he used to frown upon them.
Still Waters chapter 60 . 7/1/2015
Update! Yeah! And a lovely one it was. From what I can remember of the days with a newborn, spot on, too. Sleep deprivation. Hormones. Babies that won't cooperate. This was worth the wait. Looking forward to more.
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