Reviews for Flying Free
MusicAnonymous chapter 2 . 12/7/2013
You should use the line, "I am an enigma." It's fitting.
YO SISTER chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
SISSY, I BEG YOU TO UPDATE OTHERWISE I AM COMING TO YOUR ROOM TO KNOCK DOWN YOUR TRASH CAN. Is that a good enough threat? I think not. BUT SERIOUSLY. UPDATEEEEEEEEE.
0o0-Happy-Dagger-0o0 chapter 3 . 5/7/2013
OMG! LOVED THE CHAPTER! *Squeals* I love how you introduced Max. Don't know if I have mentioned it before but, I love your summary. OMG! I am sooooo glad you have liked my stories :)
Faliara chapter 3 . 5/4/2013
Okay... I have some advice. First of all, don't leave all the sentences in ONE HUGE BLOCK. It's harder to read. Also... Actually, you know what, I'm gonna redirect you here.

topic/130864/83968216/1/Writing-Advice

And this is actually a topic from my forum:

forum/The-Bonding-Forum/130864/
0o0-Happy-Dagger-0o0 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
OMG! AMAZING PROLOGUE! I cant wait to read more. Please update soon :D