Reviews for Engagement Party Crashers
LTA chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Omg I feel sooo bad for keiichi . He never did anything to deserve his
AnimeMaster24 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
The only person you forgot is Sayoko... Her unrequited crush on Keiichi would've made things more interesting. Also, you occasionally used verbs in the present tense in your narration, which doesn't work all that well with the third person perspective you chose. Of course these mistakes were few so it was still perfectly readable. Great job so far, there's nothing else I can really criticize other than that. Keep up the good work, this is bound to be a fun story!
Audience 0f One chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
I was kinda hesitant to read this. The summary makes it seem like its gonna be a crack-fic. (In which it probly will be.) I did have a good laugh though. I love FMJ!

And you HAVE to show us Peorth's reaction to getting screamed at. I could see peorth just going off on someone!
Gamera68 chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Oh boy, I have a bad feeling about this...LOL...

Awesome, please update soon :)