Reviews for doctrine of the fundamentally good
P.A.W.07 chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Intresting. I love how you did it in second person. It seems fitting.
maltese chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
Very nice. This is second person directed to Vlad... very nice. Very, very nice.

Scratch that. This is EXCELLENT.

A lovely one-shot, and the little comments /like these/ added the effect. Great wording, and the end dynamic sentence! Wow.

Very good. Instant favorite, my good sir!
accordianpea chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
WOW how do I type a coherent review thROUGH THESE TEARS IN MY EYES ? HOW CAN I MANAGE

This is a perfect little story, this is everything I've wanted to see written out after watching Phantom Planet. There's so much I want to compliment! I love Vlad not being able to hear, ears being blown out. I love how even in this environment, Vlad is still VLAD- 'Vlad Masters does not cope.' The tone is perfect, the words are perfect, that he tries to attack the vision when it reappears is perfect; really I could probably go through every single line of this fic and try to say why it's just So Appropriate and So Thoughtful Wow but I can't even do that b/c then I just start reading the whole fic again and forget im writing a review. I'll at least say the second person PoV is aaaabsolutely fitting for this. And that the ending is simultaneously crushing and uplifting in a weird way. I just! help I can't deal w/ this fic