Not the strongest finish but good. Overall I’d give it a 8. I had a few nitpicks but overall a good story.

You fucking bastard, you use the line! The context made it too perfect. The execution was fucking perfect. I want to see if you will finish strong.

You fucking bastard, you use the line! The context made it too perfect. The execution was perfect. Let’s see if you can finish strong now.

at this point it looks a little too hopeless lol, almost as if they will lose

LMAOOOO, Unohana really made Isane do that

Is chapter 22s title a reference to tomb raider?

Reread it once again after a long time. Still a good story but some parts still reminded me why this had not pleased me much at the time.
After the war started, it became like nonstop fighting, there wasn't really a break until the epilogue, Ichigo's behaviour during the war was simply ridiculous being lead around easily and constantly taking stupid decisions.
Somehow the enemies plan always went perfectly, which is weird as no matter what they should still be faill at some point and finally his fight against Teach was disappointing, was hoping to see him try his best but he was just whining nonstop through the fight. He's supposed to be a transcendent but it seems he's still very limited compared to the others.

Well, though those might seem like a deal breaker, its a good enough read compared to a lot of other bleach stories on this site and great if you can ignore those annoying points and a few more.

I like to imagine that he left his severed arms just lying around in the middle of the training area, just several hours of chopping off his own arm and regrowing it, and then leaving them all behind because he forgot about them.

A great story, it was a joy to read.

Ij

honestly aizens hack ability isn't as absolute as everyone makes it out to be. I guarantee it's ability to manipulate someone is based on Reiatsu levels. I doubt aizen could do anything to someone who is quite a bit stronger than him. otherwise, how could he ever lose in canon?

ya know I was reading this chapter and after it I got the arena kisuke in brave soul the surprise attack one what a luck

I'll say it again Rest in peace Ichigo nice knowing ya

poor Shinji is tired of the bullshit

and later you got to know that they are FREAKING COUSINS