Ichigo brother-zoning Orihime HAHAHAHHAHAHA I feel so bad for her (ToT)

The Ancient? Really? Lame

Nooooooo aizennnnn

A wannabe cringe-worthy Kubo Taito type of story

It's a more cringe-worthy version of Bleach.

Dafuck? Man knows how to add another cluster fuck of a development to a jumbled mess of a story. At this point, I stay just to see how much worse you will fuck this story and waste years of your life writing this. Kukuku...

Damn. The talk is unbearable. I wonder how someone can think, "Yeah, this is profound."

Bitch saying he wants every relationship in his story to feel natural and not forced is something as hypocritical as Gotei 46 given how forced everything has been

its shit

Loved the story, please continue your great work.

What you did with her makes sense. Her Bankai while having a smaller area of effect when compared to Hyorinmaru was shown to be able to go colder so much faster and so much colder that it threatens it's own wielder. Yet she never showed the same issue with causing cold when her reiatsu was raised even in a sealed form the way Toshiro did. Didn't make much sense. We also know from flashbacks she had more potential than even Renji. Having more reiryoku yet more control yet more control. Series of unfortunate events effectively left her a broken blade where she just went through the motions of being a Shinigami until she met Ichigo. People might argue she was older than him which is why she had more at the time. Personally I call eh on that. We don't know Renji's true age but we do know Rukia was so young when she entered soul society she might as well have been born there and had to take a very long time in order to mature as a result so that by the time they met they were effectively about the same maturity.

Eeeh, I don't mind Ichigo not being paired with Rukia. I just Really REALLY don't like RenjixRukia. I don't know if people look at it right but Renji's entire ideology towards her is possession. Maybe it was just poor wording on Tite's part or maybe it's something lost in translation when it's brought up. But it feels like his entire relationship with her is him feeling like she's his to have and when she became a Noble out of his reach he threw a tantrum that hurt her more than it did him. Only to turn around with the thought that if he could surpass her brother he could have her. It rubs me the wrong way completely. This was sparked by the side comment about Renji admitting his feelings here. But fuck him.

I want to see the poor girl who ends up as his girlfriend.
Meanwhile in Soul Society the most bloodthirsty woman in Soul Society's history *fufufufufu Ichigo will be mine*

Not the strongest finish but good. Overall I’d give it a 8. I had a few nitpicks but overall a good story.

You fucking bastard, you use the line! The context made it too perfect. The execution was fucking perfect. I want to see if you will finish strong.