Reviews for Way of the Protector
Nevarus chapter 16 . 1h
I really hate that you changed his Zanpakuto when it doesn't really have a reason for it.

also you seem to have a strange definition of what constitutes a harem... 2 a harem? really? even 3 wouldn't really count. a group only really starts at 4. yes, it technically states a group can be any number of people... but you don't call a single person a group. a couple of people is 2-4 ppl, so please use harem when it gets beyond a couple of people.
Nevarus chapter 5 . 3h
please don't attempt to make us feel bad for aizen, he is a monster and not the good kings kind.
Nevarus chapter 4 . 3h
don't kick hime out, leave her in the group.
Nevarus chapter 1 . 12h
soooo... the problems with aizens Zanpakuto...

first is that it is called kyoka suigetsu, which makes me question if that is it's actual bankai (because it seems too op otherwise).

second that it is a sword with getsu in its name, which is a name that is part of the combat line (you know the type that fight in close combat and without tricks).

third that his ability works on literally everyone... biggest problem I see with this, is that aizen needs to have a stronger spiritual pressure than literally everyone for it to work. I believe soifons ability works under the same principle, which means there should be people that it doesn't work on.
tylerbmotter chapter 1 . 12/27/2021
I personally would have used something like "drag them down, lucifer" or maybe a Spanish variant given resurrection abilities have the Spanish thing going on.
XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 1 . 11/20/2021
The English errors in this are frequent and hard to miss. I want to read this because the ideas are novel, but I feel like I'd need to completely turn my brain off to get into it.
Wulin chapter 11 . 11/3/2021
The ancient was a nice add and all, and wanted to see what it will add but as I read through it... I can already see the drama along with its addition. Dropping because well TMD.
Wulin chapter 10 . 11/3/2021
Drama overload. Was interesting but the BS powers over complicating and the drama ruined it for me.
Wulin chapter 3 . 11/2/2021
Ahhh I had my hopes up and you crushed it. What a long drama lol
Angelou Lloron chapter 4 . 10/27/2021
So this is like my 3rd time reading through this fic and ba-da-da-da I'm stiiiill lovin' it. I just didn't think it was Ichi's place to tell Orihime where her feelings come from. That's more of a personal critique, but also we probably see Ichigo a little differently. I sometimes change the dialogue in my head because of how I think Ichigo would've worked that sentence. But overall, I still really love this fic. Thank you for writing. It's really brilliant.
Animeharem chapter 1 . 9/16/2021
honestly, this was probably the best story to go the harem route. you had the perfect set up. but oh well
NeverEnderMan chapter 30 . 7/29/2021
that was the best bleach story I have read yet
Jordin Tucker chapter 11 . 6/27/2021
Ohhhhhh. I love this history sooooo much more than the crap I read in the manga
et-reader97 chapter 6 . 5/20/2021
Great chapter. I have a weird question though that I don't think will be answered but what happened to the arme/hands he chopped of? Did they disappear, vanish into reishi, or is there a pile of severed limbs on the ground that he has to deal with.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/16/2021
All up to this point is just straight bullshit drama that nobody gives a flying fuck about you dont even give him any good love interests for fuck sake you are just writing bullshit hell you cant even give characters their own personalities they all literally sound like some retarded fuck boi with ichigo being the fuck boi that fails at it god damn learn the basics fuck
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