Reviews for The Twist and The Weapon
Dancing-Souls chapter 6 . 10/12/2014
:( hmm well I'm wondering just how this is going to go down.
Dancing-Souls chapter 5 . 5/28/2013
hmm interesting. :D
charl88 chapter 4 . 5/21/2013
ah how can you leave me hanging like this (
i need more
Dancing-Souls chapter 4 . 5/20/2013
Oooh...O.O wow interesting.
Dancing-Souls chapter 3 . 5/18/2013
Interesting I want to know what happens next. ;)
ALittleDropOfRain chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
This is really good and i like the fact your English and grammar is good to you should definantly continue :)
Henny14 chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
Good, but I would try to work on the speech.
Instead of saying "blah blah" she said. "Blah Blah" He said. You could do it like,
"Blah Blah," He said,
"Blah Blah," She replied.
By making a new paragraph between two people talking, it makes it much easier to understand.
P.s it seems more like a T so i would make it a T.
P.p.s I did really like it.
Anon chapter 3 . 5/13/2013
Hey this story is coming along pretty well, i like ur writing style, but i wud like it if u were a bit more explicit..and other than that its pretty good :))