Reviews for Wild Turkey
angietwnsnd chapter 21 . 11/3/2013
Good story. Very sweet ending loved it.
Katy dazzledbythe Cullens chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
I love the way this has started.

NY13 chapter 21 . 10/12/2013
I really liked the setting, the plot, and characters although Bella was a little more fully fleshed out than Edward. The only problem was the romance was not very romantic and the descriptive writing was a little dull or flat. The most vivid character ended up being Victoria. You also seemed to get in the way of yourself a bit. For example I found the fact that Bella was a gifted painter interesting; you went no where with that. You introduced a romantic island and at first Bella couldn't go and you really didn't describe it. You made the Cullen's wealthy but they charged havsies on a plane ticket? Edward gave Bella jewelry but that was his m.o. - he'd already done that with Tanya. The I love you's came from a third party initiative and were diluted by his prior misguided affections with Tanya. You had the warm sultry bayou and oceans of Alabama but not one scene of the hot sweat dripping from their bodies or during Friday night lights...also a bit of humor would have gone a long way.
JayLynn-wrtngdncr chapter 21 . 10/12/2013
This was beautiful! I loved reading it :)
end2097 chapter 21 . 10/11/2013
Very sweet... Thank you
end2097 chapter 16 . 10/11/2013
Hmmm... Alice as a suspect?
end2097 chapter 13 . 10/10/2013
That was too sweet!
end2097 chapter 12 . 10/10/2013
Don't like that Bella is alone...
end2097 chapter 10 . 10/10/2013
Yeah! Things are looking up!
end2097 chapter 9 . 10/10/2013
Wondering if anyone is tagging along to doctor appts...
end2097 chapter 8 . 10/10/2013
I could see that coming...
end2097 chapter 7 . 10/10/2013
Really enjoying this story... Very well written
end2097 chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
Ha! That was funny... :)
Teresa R chapter 21 . 10/7/2013
Great story thank so much
Teresa R chapter 20 . 10/7/2013
life is good
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