Reviews for Harry Potter and the Alternative Life
Faery66 chapter 3 . 1/22/2017
Hope to read more soon.
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Luiz4200 chapter 3 . 6/5/2014
Yay! Sirius is free!
belle hawk chapter 3 . 8/8/2013
You have a plot that has a great potential to develop but you need to organize your thoughts and try to describe the events, people and place. Also you are writing not speaking thus change your style accordingly. I used to have the same problem but when I went over what I had written., I noticed that no one apart from me would get it because I hadn't written anything about what I saw and planned in my mind.
PDeffinP chapter 3 . 8/2/2013
more chapters please
SakuraKoi chapter 3 . 7/13/2013
Wow
SakuraKoi chapter 2 . 7/13/2013
O.O
SakuraKoi chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Oh no
Anonymous chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
I am curious about Harry's intelligence, considering he's just over one in the books. You also seem to have hinted towards that... Looking forward to seeing how this develops, with those two as parents. Dunno how Sirius would be as a dad though. Please update :)
Fae0306 chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
Lovely!
HoratiosGirl101 chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
please keep writing! _
geetac chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
I like the chapter.