Reviews for From PMs to Park Visits
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
THIS IS LIFE THIS IS NOT A PARODY OR SPOOF
xxCallMeAmyxx chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
OMG I SHIP THIS SO SO SO BAD RIGHT NOW OMG I LOVE THIS I LOVE SAURA!
Marie E. Brooke chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
IlY, this fic just OMG...Saura forever! XD
TrisanaChandler13 chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! All of the subtle, little details made this perfection. :D
outside the crayon box chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
Found this link while I was stalking profiles and I'm glad I did because this is extraordinarily good.
Palefur chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Oh, um. Hi. I'm probably the only one reviewing who really doesn't know Sam or Laura. But if you are reading this I am not a creey stalker from the internet. This feels like the begining of a joke. A Palefur enters into a review/comment session. . . Have fun picking the ending. Anyway the review. Since I know neither Sam or Laura (as stated above) instead of analyzing the characters (like I'm capable of that), I'll analyze your writing style (HA! Like you can do that!) . . . First point is the sheer amount of imagry you used. I could picture Sam and Laura with the buggy, and then in the park with so much detail. I could imagine the color shimmering in her hair and the admirarion in Laur's eyes. And the repition of ILY that ingraved themsleves into the soul of this story. Ok that got weird really fast. . . And I could imagine so clearly Laura sitting n the plane with her phone (even through idk what she looks like). Agh, the pains of no wifi. Joanna has a parlour? So this is Saura. It was well written. Just kidding well written is like an insult its extravagent spectacular, superb, marveleous, extraordinary, breathtaking, lovely, (gets dictionary) sublime! Stunning! I laud it! ILY.
Being A Wallflower chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
I SHIP SAURA WITH ALL MA LITTLE SHIPPER HEART.

I CANT SAY ILY NOW CUZ IT SEEMS AWKWARD.

XXX
painkillerjane chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
aww. AAAAAAAAWWWWWWW!Aw.
that is SAURA! aww
FutureStarkid chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
oh. my. god. BRILLIANT
Someone aka Me chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
I'll be honest — I'm not entirely sure how to review this. Because it's me. And it's Sam. And you already know that I'm of the opinion that this is the best end to a comp ever. So…

[She knows Sam will read everything she has not said between the lines of everything she has anyway.] This. Because this.

And the quotes were perfection. And the bowling reference. (although, jsyk, darling, I'd never call it a bowling "contest." either a tournament or a match, depending XD)

THE CONVERSATION WITH MY PARENTS OMYGOD PAULA DO YOU HAVE HIDDEN CAMERAS OR SOMETHING HOLY JDSKFJSDLKFJSDL. BECAUSE THAT. BECAUSE THAT IS /ME/. BECAUSE DEFLECT DEFLECT DEFLECT AND DEFLECT POORLY AT THAT AND THE BLATANT SUBJECT CHANGE AFTER VAUGE CRYPTIC SENTENCE IS SO EXACTLY HOW IT GOES EVERY TIME.

[Her glasses slip down her nose a little, and she pushed them back up.] I'm dead serious. Hidden cameras?

[but the idea of recognising faces to Laura is like monogamy to her wives; a strange and foreign concept, unthinkable and confusing.] ILY.

AND CHARLIE THE CAR {3

[She's always been awkward, especially with people, but this is Sam, Sammie, Samuela. This is the girl she's been sharing her secrets with for almost two years now, the girl she co-captains the HMS Charlie/Draco with, the girl she has spent countless hours writing fics for because she wants nothing more than to make her happy.] This. This is perf.

[She wants to fling her arms around Sam's neck and pull her close, familiarise herself with Sam's scent, so that she can recognise her anywhere from this moment on.] also perf.

pasty. you called me pasty. *sulks undignifiedly*

[ILY, Laura thinks, and she wonders how the words would feel out loud. / Awkward, she suspects. / She does not say them.] So it's not cameras. You're just in my head, is that it?

["I was afraid I was going to walk past you or something."] THIS. AND YOU KNOW WHY. THIS.

["Hey!" Sam protests. "Sometimes it's, like, seventy!"] XDXDXD

[Laura resists the urge to smack her and opts for an eye roll instead.] HOW. DO. YOU. KNOW. THIS? HOW DO YOU KNOW THAT I DO THIS? ALL. THE. TIME.

[remembering the way Sam's mouth had framed the words je t'aime so very perfectly.] &hearts

PAULA THIS IS SAURA PERFECTION KJDLKSFJDLSKFJSDKLFJSDKLFSD.
(and beautiful in that I can read it ace!saura because reasons XD)
truces chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
SAURA SAURA SAURA AHAHAHA
dimitrisgirl18 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
PAULA

DEAR LORD TAKE THE WHEEL AND THE PIECES OF MY SHIPPER HEART

THIS WAS SO GOOD I CANNOT EVEN.

Everything about this was so /sam/ and so /laura/ and so /saura/ that it's not even funny. Sometimes I marvel at the fact that we are all just teenage-20 year old girls on the internet. I am secretly praying for this saura meeting to happen.

ILY.

Allie
saltzmans chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
PAULA OMG YOU-YOU-YOU WROTE SAURA I AM DEAD THIS WAS BEYOND FLAWLESS LET ME LOVE YOU FOREVER
MissingMommy chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
This is an extremely hard piece to review because essentially, I'm telling you on how well you characterized Laura and I. With that being said, I don't think there has ever been a better ending to a comp than this.

But seriously, how much did you stalk me? Because I literally had a map of town in my head while reading this, and could pinpoint where I figured this meeting would happen and where the park was. It was rather scary.

All the little details. You really did your homework. I liked the addition of Laura's bowling and my tattoo. And then there was the stuff off our profiles and things we've said to each other. The weather and how I've always argued that Florida 's weather does get below 70, and how Laura gets sick of the snow. That was wonderful.

And the fact that you've added my belief of their being one person to change a person's sexuality. It's like using my own words against me. But you played that nicely into the fic. The misinterrupted!Parlour!sex dream addition was humorous as well.

Like seriously, I don't know how you managed it, but you got me shipping myself with Laura. And that doesn't make any sense, but it's you and Kelly, and I just don't even care. So yeah. I liked the fic. Thanks for keeping the smut out of it. That would've been awkward.
Cheeky Slytherin Lass chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
Paula. Just.. Paula...

There are no words.

I love you, and I'm proud to call you my wife.
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