Reviews for Safe and Sound
Takerslady chapter 1 . 11/15/2017
Idiots, they're all idiots
Takerslady chapter 26 . 11/15/2017
Idiots, they're all idiots
Guest chapter 28 . 10/17/2017
Why is noone in the pack able to track mark? How is mark able to beat some many ppl even though he js drunk? Why wouldn't at least 1 wolf stay behind with the girls. If the wolves havr heightened senses how come noone heard any of the screaming and gun shots at the house? The beach isnt that far feom the homes. Why was it that it took renesmee to cone and yell mark is at the house for the pack to get off their asses? Also if mark is just a drunj human how did he recover from all the nut kicks from jodie so quickly? Also how xome it tookso many wolves to incapacitate him. They were taking turns hitting him. He would have been killed or knocked out cold from a single punch theyre that strong ao how did he withstand so many hits and kicks and still manage to antagonize the wolves? Mark must be half superman is that his secret? If ppls mates/imprints are in danger how did the wolves stay so calm and simply shake all the time? Seeing ones mate in that state and injured bodies all around im surprised mark wasn rippes to shreds immediately. I thibk you are a talented author but from the scene where jodie thinks embry imprinted on someone else and the wolves do wverything but what is logical when tracking and dealing with mark. I feel like those were filler scenes that didnt really fit with the rest od the story. Idk maybe im too picky.. I was so into the story but the scenes felt forced. I will cheer you on as an author as you are talented its just these scenes took away fromthw over story.
Guest chapter 28 . 10/17/2017
I truly enjoyed the story characters relationships everything until jodie started going retard. She caused the misunderstandings and made the story so angsty i wanted to punch her in the face to snap her out of the woe is me funk she was in. Also i feel like all the wolves failed. What reason would they all need to go to the beach for one measley human? How did they continuously lose the scent of a man who is discribed as always smelling lime whiskey? Why are their senses dulled whwnevee
Guest chapter 31 . 4/6/2017
I love this story so much. I am waiting for the next chepter desperately!
Guest chapter 31 . 9/6/2016
I'd love a sequel
Guest chapter 25 . 7/17/2016
I love this story soooo much! I started reading it yesterday and I just can't stop
BreeOUAT chapter 22 . 2/1/2016
I like you're story
Amnesia Arsenic chapter 18 . 10/26/2015
God, I'm crying right now
iwolves chapter 31 . 8/31/2015
Awesome i love this story!
heidilovesreading chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
Finished it all! And I loved it! You didn't make the Gracie and Brady story. I was really looking forward to reading it.
Sarah chapter 2 . 3/6/2015
These first few chapters have already given me tears, shivers and so much admiration for you. Please continue writing many more stories
Guest chapter 30 . 12/12/2014
Thanks for sharing.
gokatiego chapter 31 . 10/2/2014
LOVED IT
Whispers in a Thundercloud chapter 31 . 9/12/2014
They're so cute! SEQUEL TOO!
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