Reviews for The Sword of Humanity
duit 13 chapter 9 . 3/29
Update please this one is rather cold and I am fortunate enough to own and like sots2 so I get this story rather well
KingLoitl chapter 9 . 3/24
update please! GOD i love Human Supremacy stories
Faraway-R chapter 7 . 11/20/2013
In the galaxy of terrors, we never get the choice of heroes. Only of the villains to root aganist.
Faraway-R chapter 5 . 11/20/2013
Nope I did not see it coming. Then again I never had an opportunity or incentive to actually sit on the "Council is subservient to Humanity in Universe trying to kill everyone" scenario, and find the possible changes.
Faraway-R chapter 3 . 11/20/2013
You know, this is one universe where Mass Effect policy of never tampering with Primary Relays is UNIQUELY JUSTIFIED.

For humans, every new colony - is like opening a Primary Relay into Rachni space. On a GOOD DAY. Usually the days are worse.

Council only dodged the bullet by virtue of being careful. Wonder how Protheans fared.
Granten chapter 5 . 10/13/2013
I'm sorry but so far these seem less like elite soldiers with xenophobia problems and more like psychotic buffoons barely able to follow basic orders and very liable to send the person they're supposed to be protecting into a psychotic breakdown.

Also I am struggling to see what kind of logic would have the Council send Liara on this, give her zero information on what to expect en route and expect her to actually make it (unless they intended her to die).
Guest chapter 5 . 7/21/2013
I'm sorry but if this is the future of humanity then i dont want the see it. humans can do some pritty monstrous things but if we then into pro human dicks then manby we are already lost. i dotn like were this is going and its pritty bad. so i wish you luck on it but i dont think i will come back.
bh18 chapter 8 . 7/17/2013
Okay when I saw Jack Harper as the Director of a Xenocidal humanity, it made sense. But now we have this new, maybe Javik, character in play, plus the reveal the Harper is LETTING certain things happen...things aren't making sense anymore. And I love it. This is a proper plot twist!
bh18 chapter 6 . 7/17/2013
Not to nitpick, but wouldn't it be 002? Since the original Leviathan was 001.
Ibskib chapter 9 . 7/1/2013
Unless Liara's facial structure was changed too, wouldn't Shepard or williams notice the resemblance, or at least be a bit suspicious of her. She isn't part of their rooster so it also seems unlikely that they would put her into action almost immediately after picking her up, considering how security conscious they are in other areas.
Ibskib chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
What exactly os black 21, black 12, and black 17? I'm not familiar with the non mass effect elements and tried googling it to no avail.
Ibskib chapter 2 . 6/30/2013
Nice, this is the first fic I've read where Humanity deals with the council races from such a degree of strength, makes for a nice change of pace.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
fantastic fic.
Ferdiad chapter 5 . 6/17/2013
This is probably the most interesting AU plotline for the mass effect series I've ever seen. Saren being subtle is fucking awesome.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/6/2013
God this is Amazing. So original. So brilliant. So worth it. Please for the love of kerberos, continue with this story.
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