Reviews for Harry Tano
MonsterSirenBooks chapter 27 . 8/11
"Just how do you do that cool billowing thing?"
This is the best quotes I have ever read in HP fanfiction!
MattBlack chapter 41 . 8/7
Oooh, the runic doors are kind of developing into stargates... XD 3
MattBlack chapter 36 . 8/7
Don't let them forget taking out patents, they must have learned SOMETHING from the goblins selling LILY'S invention to Malfoy and his ilk.
MattBlack chapter 35 . 8/7
Btw... Potter and Black are two of "The sacred 28", while the Malfoy family are immigrants. Sounds weird considering how archaical the wiz government is, that he even has the right to remove two of the founding seats of the Wizengamot...
MattBlack chapter 35 . 8/7
Why didn't Augusta point out Lucius lies? Ahsoka didn't force Harry to take the lordship of Potter... It was effing stipulated in the Potter wills.

At 8 he would gain access to trust vault and family vault, with only right to withdraw money from the trust vault. At 11 he was to claim lordship. You forgot the will reading yourself? XD

If Lucius was shown to be lying, he would lose support of some of the Wizengamot...
MattBlack chapter 32 . 8/7
Always found it stupid that the magicals use a title as inquisitor... Have they forgotten the name of the witch hunts? Answer is: the Inquisition lol...
MattBlack chapter 28 . 8/6
I call bullshit lol... You're trying to say Abraham defeated Harry after two MONTHS of training, while Harry's been training since he was 5-6 years old... As a former martial arts practitioner I KNOW that's impossible.

I don't give a flying crap about how prodigious you claim Abraham to be, I say Abe is either you as a self insert, or an OC you identify with. What's next, he gathers a harem of witches who all want to be with the muggle? Lol... XD
MattBlack chapter 22 . 8/6
Ginny is such a stalker... I always found her creepy... Luna on the other hand is adorable.
EdTheBeast chapter 57 . 6/26
A great MUST READ Harry Potter/ Star Wars crossover as well as a few other types thrown in. If anyone has a complete sequel, EdTheBeast is my fan and AO3 name; send a names so can read it. TheBeardedOne is an excellent author and everyone should read his/her stories.
27mad97 chapter 12 . 6/23
Why write a harry potter fanfiction if you don't like the world, the magical world has problems but they aren't primitive and savage also the mundune world has problems too so does the star war universe the fact you put down instant travel such as the flo network,portkeys and appration as useless is just unbelievable I don't know why some people who just because magicals doesn't have electricity that they are primitive, they don't need it they have other methods that doesn't pollute the planet "magic" to use it for whatever they want you are explanation about why electronics doesn't work with magic is ridiculous
Guest chapter 16 . 5/11
I really like how this story is playing out, but I have to ask...where is everyone getting the Khyber crystals/materials for their lightsabers? I can understand Harry using one of Ahsoka's two sabers, but where did Hermione get one?
UzuRyu chapter 56 . 4/16
Wow... It went from very good to absolute shit in a record time... That's really a shame.
Guest chapter 33 . 3/2
Damn... it is rare to see a story fall off a cliff into a pile of dung so quickly.
You've justified this a a divergence from canon, which is odd given that this story has verged far away from canon the moment that Ahsoka Tano took Harry Potter out of the Dursley home.
No, this was just a 90 degree turn from a story I was enjoying to a story I have no interest in reading. Kudos for the first 32 chapters, you has an interesting concept going. Do try to keep some consistency in your future works, however: changing the entire premise and plot of a story in the middle of said story is jarring and usually a bad idea.
spanky1482 chapter 57 . 2/19
got to say really enjoyed this story. You need to right more like it
jdboss1 chapter 4 . 12/19/2021
You are not the first but probably not even the hundreds to have done it

But I'm scan have to stop here and rant

The idea that people can pass off the kids in a well I possessions is laughable

Who takes care of a child upon the death of their parents is not done in Will
the dead person's wishes are only polite suggestions and have no actual legal bearing or at least in muggle UK

So many stories have it that magical UK you can inherit children as easy as some declaring it in a will
no social services deciding if you're fit to raise a child and so forth

The other thing that irritates me

Magic Britain does or does not follow muggle Britain culture

if it does not then magical wills should be a bit more unique and magical but instead so many authors when reading them out literally copy muggle legal jargon
I never discuss the fees/taxes of executed a will

But why would to early 20s adults write a will even in a war one thing I know about young people they think they're immortal
if one dies the other should inherited all (as default)
if they both die why do they think their child would survive if whatever could kill both them probably kill the child as well

I like the idea of a pre-standard has Potter default will service charged by the goblins as part of running the estate and if they want anything extra or different to standards copy and charge them through the nose
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