|Reviews for Harry Tano|
| tcl7189 chapter 57 . 9/3
| RHJunior chapter 57 . 8/29
Well by golly, you read Tales of the Questor?
I'm flattered. I'm the artist!
Really gotta get off my duff and start updating it more frequently...
| RHJunior chapter 45 . 8/29
But... what effect will living RIGHT ON THE MOON have on werewolves?
| Rune Tobor chapter 33 . 8/28
And a pureblood killed Tom.
But not because it was the right thing to do.
Most wizards and witches do not deserve the magic they have.
Look for WIZARDS FALL.
It is here on FFN.
| RHJunior chapter 12 . 8/28
WIZARDS don't have logic? MUGGLES are just as bad, if not worse.
| Rune Tobor chapter 32 . 8/28
I am going to keep reading.
You have finished this, not all of the writers manage that.
Redeem Snape will you?
I was wondering if you were going to redeem everyone!
Fudge is a fool, Malfoy however is a murderer who needs to die.
Umbitch deserves torture and a slow agonizing death.
Everything was going to easy for Harry and Hermione.
| Rune Tobor chapter 25 . 8/28
Someone has to have written a story where Sirius does not let Hagrid take Harry when his parents die.
There are plenty of ones that have someone else taking Harry from the doorstep.
One is titled HARRY MCGONAGALL.
Good fic so far, I think that Ahsoka being just above a squib is a good idea.
The restriction prevents her from becoming a Mary Sue.
While it can be fun watching a super powerful person put the pureblood down painfully, a fic with over powered characters is very hard to do well.
| Rune Tobor chapter 24 . 8/28
An Albus who admits he was wrong is uncommon.
Learning from mistakes is all to rare as well.
Becoming humble and helpful?
With well over 700 thousand fanfics it may not be a first.
But it feels like it!
| Rune Tobor chapter 13 . 8/27
Change and change again...
Rowling did a shitty job of redeeming Snape.
For years, over a decade, he was and acted like a bastard!
Suddenly maxing Snape secretly good like she did just doesn't work!
Maybe you can do so but it is a huge job.
| Rune Tobor chapter 12 . 8/27
I'm reading another fic where the Force and Magic are just different ways to use the same energy
Your making them separate is OK too.
| Rune Tobor chapter 9 . 8/27
Sadly I think they are right. You have to read a lot about magic before alchemy is mentioned. And the philosophers stone is an alchemy idea not normally mentioned in magic or fantasy stories.
Sorcerers stone is alliterative as well.
| Rune Tobor chapter 7 . 8/27
Albus Dumbledore is supposed to be a great wizard!
Why did he leave the soul shard of Tom in Harry?
Did he not know early on?
And if basilisk venom destroyed the diary why did it not purge Harry?
So many mistakes...
Good job with removing it but keeping the information!
| Rune Tobor chapter 2 . 8/27
What was Rowling thinking when she had Harry abused by the Dursleys?
Her main inspiration of the wizarding world was great.
But she failed again and again on the details.
You can judge a book by the fanfiction written about it.
The more flaws the more fics.
And a decent second chapter.
I may have to login and favorite this.
| Rune Tobor chapter 1 . 8/27
Well the start is good.
And Dumbledore is evil, maybe he has good intentions but he acts evil.
The Dursleys deserve, well you'd delete the review if I said it.
Demons in human suits that is the Dursleys.
| pschlegs62 chapter 57 . 8/24
Really enjoyed the story. I had to finish before I could review. It's a great blend of both stories. Keep up the good work!