Reviews for Blood Before the Dawn
Nyx811 chapter 1 . 1/2
nice update soon
shainag322 chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Is Tye going to question Jamie about him being Blue Beetle? Because I totally see someone in his position doing that.
Violentshadow chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
AWESOMENESS!
musicgirlforever101 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Omg! I freaking loved this! PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS FOR THIS!
youngjusticefanforalltime chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Good! Keep up the amazing work!
Windona chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Actually it's Jaime. Pronounced Hai-may. It's the Spanish version of the name 'James'.

You have potential, but it's obviously rough. Have you considered getting a beta reader? (BTW my account on FFN is the same as the username I'm using now).
Rose Jennison chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Nicely done, some good character insight.
It'd be interesting to see some after affects of this. I always wondered what the rest of the team would think if they knew the scarab had a voice of its own, and after the strange voice told them to help him they must be curious. And a conversation between Tye and Jaimie could be interesting.
Linzerj chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
His name should be spelt Jaime. Its Spanish; a 'j' in spanish often sounds like an 'h'.
This was interesting character building though! Nice work