|Reviews for Keeping Time|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
nope nope nope nope nope.
| eekz chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
This was lovely!
I especially loved the Doctor's scenes - and "French away." That was a great touch. :)
| strikingtwelves chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I love this. As much as I ship 11/Clara (which is a LOT), I know the Doctor loves River too, and this was a beautiful way of portraying it. Thank you.
| kinzeylee chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
sweet, yet kinda sad in the end. i really like the transition that we get to see, as the Doctor mourns River, and then falls in love with Clara. it seems organic and real and natural. really wonderful story!
| lily-flores chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Such an unusual storyline but I really enjoyed it ! Especially the end obviously. Whouffle feels! And of course the doctor's accent.
I really wish you'd make a sequel on how the doctor would react by finding Clara.
| whovalista chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
I can't. I literally can't.
This story was amazing. Like actually amazing. I re-read it 3 times to take in the amazingness that surrounded this fic. Like wow.
I personally felt you got the characters completely right. The way they spoke (even in their Yorkshire accents), the way they acted it was amazing. I couldn't get over the likeliness between them.
Whilst I don't ship Eleven/River, I do think the way you linked River in was great and fitted well with the story, It was nice to see The Doctor consider all aspects of his realtionship before coming to a decision.
It was so sad to see Clara feel as though she had been used (which I fear in this fic was true) but it was a nice touch and nice to see she wanted things to continue as though nothing had happened.
All in all, this fic was absolutely amazing, like the episode, and I can't wait to see if you have any more fics planned or up already. thank you!
| voicelikehoney chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
This was PERFECT. I've always loved your writing, and so to see you take on Eleven/Clara was a real 'eeeee!' moment for me when I got an alert in my inbox about it :-) I should have known before I even looked you'd write something beautiful, poignant and respectful of every character on the show.
I love River. I love Eleven. I love Clara. Looks like you do too, because this story was a love letter to all of them. THANK you. xxx
| a cold day in december chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
This fic was so lovely and beautifully written and I loved the Yorkshire accent touch, made me giggle. Thank you for writing this! :D
| SunnySmile1324 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Beautiful! I wish there was more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
This is my new favorite fic, and I don't even ship 11/Clara. I appreciate the fact that you included River but didn't bash her. You're my new favorite author now, hope that's okay with you.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
I cried. That was beautiful.
| TeAmLeO.56 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
This was absoultly amazing! I loved it! (And I don't even ship Clara and Eleven)
One of my favorite things was how you managed to put River in there, while making it a Clara/Eleven fic, awesome touch!
Any way, epic! Keep it up! :)
| libranravenclaw chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
I just want to hug this fic. It's very lovely, and poignant, though just enough to bring out that bit of angst without overwhelming someone with it. djhfskdjhfsjkd But AHHH Clara/Eleven and I just love this!
| A Hopeful Voice chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
You are amazing. This is perfect and tasteful and completely believable. I love how you treated the Doctor's marriage to River since it's usually ignored. Thank you!
| Sagethorn chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
You wrote a Clara/11 fanfic. You mentioned River. You didn't bash her. I think I love you.
Seriously though, this was just... I don't even have words. This was just really really really good and really sweet (And this is coming from someone who doesn't even ship Clara/11!). Love the idea of this story, with them being sort of stranded in a town. You wrote their characters so well, too (I especially love how you wrote the accents). And I LOVE how you flowed this into the episode. And I can't even describe how much I loved the scenes with him lying in bed thinking of River. Amazing job! :3