Reviews for Lurking Shadows
AnnaRavenheart chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
I liked this one, I love how you portrayed George and his sadness. Fred's death must have impacted him greatly, and I'm glad you decided to show that in this fic. First of all, the title was really interesting and I loved that; it's one of the rare titles that would catch my attention. I didn't spot any mistakes in this fic, and I loved your description of Fred's feelings (especially the ending sentence). Great job!
eemmaatt33 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
I really liked this. I thought George's grief was written clearly. You expressed his feelings nicely, especially the emptiness he was feeling. I like the idea of this story. Of him searching for the stone to talk to his twin again. It's very unique. I also like that he didn't find the stone and that he actually ran into Firenze. The topic of the future was a wise choice to have coincided with your story. Well done.