|Reviews for Yakitate! Japan: The Carnie Collection|
| Bite The Dust chapter 13 . 7/3/2014
Oh, Spencer, not even an alternate universe version of yourself has a lick of sense...
| Bite The Dust chapter 12 . 4/15/2014
Cute, cute, cute. And almost not at all angsty. You're well on your way.
| Bite The Dust chapter 9 . 8/20/2013
Well, the Knife Thrower's a goner. It was nice knowing him.
You never fail to write something sweet and cute that lifts my spirits
| Bite The Dust chapter 8 . 8/2/2013
Oh, you used stuff from my story I feel so flattered. And I think the Ringmaster is at least a little bit crazy... She does do all that experimenting on the other carnies. Strongman, too, is crazy no matter what AU he's in...
| Bite The Dust chapter 7 . 7/28/2013
Oh geez... There's really not much I can say about that, that's just icky. Poor kids.
| Bite The Dust chapter 6 . 7/23/2013
Ouch, ouch ouch ouch ouch... I don't think this sounded angsty at all, just kind of like there's no energy in it. I guess you could call it dry? It doesn't feel at all unfitting or bad, though.
| Bite The Dust chapter 5 . 6/24/2013
Awwww... That was beautiful
| Bite The Dust chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
I think I find Monica the mad scientist way more appealing than I really should...
| Bite The Dust chapter 3 . 6/1/2013
Haha! I knew I'd like this chapter just reading the title. Darn good, just like I thought
| Bite The Dust chapter 2 . 5/14/2013
Aaaah, the knife thrower is kind of a scary dude...
| Bite The Dust chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Aw, this is so cute I knew it would be. I can't wait for more.