Reviews for Lost Knight: A New Dawn
SnowflakesandMozart chapter 21 . 5/1
I really loved this story. Your premise is one of the more unusual remixes I've read, and I certainly would enjoy seeing where you take these characters if you do write ESB and ROTJ. If you never write more in this 'verse, this story stands quite well on its own. (Though I am looking forward to reading the other one you've written.)

As for Luke's naivete, I thought his behavior was logical, given what he's been told and what he knows. I think his lack of sophistication, shall we say, is one reason Obi-Wan didn't tell him that his father had become Darth Vader right off the bat in ANH. It certainly makes sense to me that Luke would believe what he was told by Mara and Vader, since he doesn't have the other side of the story.

I'm so happy Cody made an appearance. I haven't watched TCW or Rebels, so I only know the clones from FF, but he's one of my favorite characters. Dare I hope Rex will make an appearance in later stories?
SnowflakesandMozart chapter 4 . 4/18
This is very exciting so far! It's hard to put down.
Guest chapter 21 . 4/30/2018
It was a great fic!
guest chapter 21 . 5/2/2017
Great story! Looking forward to the sequel!
Dragonjek chapter 6 . 3/9/2017
Also-I forgot to mention this in my review for last chapter-Mara Jade is smooth as fuck. I love how you turned Old Ben's original speech on it's head, and how she put all the pieces into play to possibly lead him to the Empire.
Dragonjek chapter 5 . 3/9/2017
Declarative statement: I believe we have conclusive evidence as to the identity of Obi-wan's kidnapper.
Praelio chapter 21 . 1/9/2017
This was an absolutely PHENOMENAL story to read. I truly do love how you re-wrote Episode IV. Cheers!
Orion's Left Arm chapter 12 . 8/21/2016
This story is perfect so far!
A reasonable division between 2 groups of interestingly-written characters;
a sassy Leia who actually uses her force sensitivity;
a Mara Jade who's genuinely manipulative, yet has shreds of decency shining through;
an OC (at least I think Winter's an OC) who plays a valuable role without being a Mary-Sue;
a Bobba Fett with vague morals and lots of gruffness;
All I all, a genuinely plausible, detailed, and interesting AU!

P.S.- HK-47 is officially bae
Great Sage Equaling Heaven chapter 21 . 12/19/2015
Well, this was really great, I will be anticipating the sequel.
Please kill Luke chapter 15 . 6/26/2015
His naive stupidity is offensive and annoying, hopefully he dies in a fire or something equally gruesome.
Hakazu chapter 21 . 3/14/2015
While I had some problems in the beginning with the story the rest was really good! Looking forward to the sequel
Hakazu chapter 11 . 3/14/2015
HELL YEAH! Go Obi-wan!
Ky111 chapter 21 . 10/30/2014
Awesome story and looking forward to getting into the sequel. Absolutely love the Obi-Wan twist interested in how the Emperor will react when he finds out Obi-Wan is still young and in his prime (it really bugged me how in the movies Obi-Wan died so easily and quickly in the movies especially as he seemed to have the upper hand over Vader, I'm aware he did it all intentionally as it was part of his plan and this got worse after seeing the prequels seeing how capable Qui-Gon who was 60 during TPM and Dooku who was about 85 when he died were still very capable and a force to be reckoned with at their advanced ages to see Obi-Wan portrayed [although Vader was no slouch but he was weaker and older although he was only in his 40's but his injuries and condition would of added years to his life, as well apart from the extra strength his cybernetic limbs gave him but that also came with a high cost of disadvantages as well] to be so weak granted he didn't exactly spend the 20 years training physically and living on Tatooine probably battered him a bit but still).

Anyway looking forward to getting into the sequel and I hope Obi-Wan continues to be the driving force behind the rebellion as well as the others continuing to play very important roles as well, always thought a better ending for Star Wars (well this particular saga) would of been a final show down between Obi-Wan and the Emperor.

Interested in this Windu twist and very interested if Luke will find him (if he's still alive) and be trained by him. He'll be a very suitable Master for Luke, also very straight forward and wont sugar coat how things are and were for Luke but he would show enough tact and make sure he prepares Luke before telling him what will no doubt be some very hard truths for Luke. Plus it's all stuff Luke should know and be forced to deal with before facing the enemy not be confronted with it in the midst of a battle (that's just stupid and has disaster written all over it).

Guest chapter 4 . 10/17/2014
leia should have stayed in sexy storm trooper armor
Kathryn Renee chapter 21 . 7/18/2014
Sorry hit the wrong button. This is one of my favorite stories the characters are convincing, the plot line is intriguing, and you made a Star Wars AU that is an interesting what if scenario. I would absolutely love it if you would post a sequel.
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