Reviews for Of Wyverns and Men
AceBen chapter 7 . 6/16
Oh my gosh. Never have I read anything for so long. Reading from the start to here was such a treat, your writing is amazing and it really inspires me to get a fanfiction of my own started.
There is so much stuff to love here. I love your interpretation of the Shepherds' everyday life, how you change the battles to fit a written format, and, best of all, Cherche's character is just outstanding. Even though I've seen you're putting this on a hiatus (it looks like a TON of hard work), I would love to see you finish this story, because right now it is one of the best reads I have come across. :)
Billur chapter 21 . 5/30
I absolutely LOVE this story! I think you are doing everything perfectly, and hope you write more soon. Also I am wondering when you're going to have Robin and Cherche marry, because I'm waiting for that to happen and the wait is killing me! Again I absolutely LOOOOVVVEEE this fanfic and consider it to be one of the best, and I hope you write more soon.
Doom Marine 54 chapter 7 . 4/29
Well Robin's mental breakdown was handled with disgustingly amateurish writing. So much so that any goodwill I had towards this fic has been dropped like a lead turd.
kurokitsune028 chapter 10 . 4/14
I like this story a lot, it has long chapters and a interesting story. I hope you keep writing more
Guest chapter 21 . 4/7
I hope you can continue this story soon! If you have free time that is.
csihawk chapter 21 . 3/30
I'm sad that you won't be continuing Of Wyverns and Men, at least for a while. But I can very much understand. I'm not on official hiatus for my stories, but I haven't updated one of them in a month, one in two months, and one in...6 months?

BTW my latest story was inspired by this very story! And I wrote much shorter chapters than my other stories, which helped a lot. So I would recommend to you to do the series of short stories rather than a deep, lengthy story. While I would loooove a deep, lengthy story, I just feel like it's a huge undertaking, and realistically, the series of one shots is easier to do. A healthy middleground would be to do a lengthy story, but with shorter chapters! Or, as I think some reviewers may have said, why not tackle both?

Sometimes, it's nice to have more than one story going on, so that when you're stuck on one story, you can give your brain some rest and work on the story. So, I hope while you work on your new projects, you might every now and then stop by Of Wyverns and Men and post something in there.

Good luck, whatever your choice is! Writing is hard, so I think all of us readers understand any difficulty you may have, and we will (maybe begrudgingly) accept whatever you choose.

Readers Note: ...Also, I need to finish Fates Birthright so I can tackle on my ideas while they're fresh. Go, Corrin x Kagero! But it's taking so long to finish, since I reset until I get satisfaction every time my units level up. Poor Awakening fans, they'll probably be hit hard while authors shift attention to Fates...
Fireminer chapter 21 . 3/30
You know what? If not for the hiatus, then this message would have been a great new. A short story of Oboro (you don't know half the love the Japanese forums gave her) would be a good addition to your collection.
SVFFR chapter 21 . 3/30
I would personally prefer you finish this story before you start another one, but that's how I feel about all authors who decide to write multiple stories at once. I'm not a particularly big fan of Oboro's supports or her character, and I ship her with Takumi anyway, so I'd probably go with the series of shorts or even just a one-shot or two. Then again, I never bothered with Cherche besides to grind out 100% Avatar support convos and your story pleasantly surprised me, so I wouldn't mind if you decided to write a full-length Oboro story. In the end, you're the author; do whatever you feel like doing. Just... please don't abandon stories. I've read way too many good fics that are practically doomed to never be finished.
Gyarii chapter 21 . 3/30
I love Oboro and would love a full length story!
TheGunmaster chapter 21 . 3/30
A full-length story, hopefully based in the Revalation campaign. Also, would you have Oboro hook up with Takumi? I find their relationship to be very genuine and sweet.
Ocharlos chapter 21 . 3/29
You made me jump with happines when I saw an update, almost dropped my phone when I saw that it wasn't, at least now I know that it would not be uploaded for a while.

Can't say about the other story, I don't have the game yet, but try with short stories.
Guest chapter 21 . 3/29
I like your stuff and Oboro is my favorite character as well. Count me in for anything involving her. Though I admit I'd rather see something other than Takumi x Oboro.
Tomovnikov chapter 21 . 3/29
Can't comment on fates yet, as it hasn't been released where I live yet. But you really should just write whatever you want to the most, no need to force yourself if you've lost passion.
xav chapter 21 . 3/29
Id love a full length story with Oboro, but thats easy to say when i am not writing it. So whichever you feel like doing most would be ok for me.
arcticGlaciologist chapter 21 . 3/29
I feel kind of sad that we won't be seeing much more of this story for a while- so pardon me if I'm a litte let down when I find out that the new chapter isn't a chapter.

However!
I like the idea of a long-form story set in Fates. I don't ship Oboro and Kamui, but I didn't ship Cherche and Robin before this story. Can't wait to see where it goes!
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