|Reviews for Beautiful Darkness|
| littlemixlover17 chapter 9 . 12/28/2013
Please write more soon! I love it! Clato for life!
| Alice Green chapter 6 . 11/26/2013
This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/23/2013
Update soon awesome chapter
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Self esteem not self of steam
| Espanyolo chapter 8 . 11/10/2013
This is SO emotional!
I really love how Clove meets Prim and actually apologizes for everything in just two words. It's great :')
| clovelycato555 chapter 7 . 10/21/2013
This chapter was so good!
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/19/2013
OH MY GALE!
| Lucy chapter 7 . 10/5/2013
I love this story :) please continue :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/2/2013
TAYLOR YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON BBY3
| cherrycolahoneykisses chapter 7 . 10/2/2013
| Clato chapter 6 . 8/21/2013
| TayLovesClato chapter 6 . 7/30/2013
This is really good! Please continue ! :)
| Cornsilk chapter 6 . 7/19/2013
I wanted first say thank you for your time in reading my story and take of Cato and Clove in The Untold story of District 2.
I just finished reading what you have so far. And I really liked your take on the pair. I have just finished adding your story to my library in my fanfiction app. I will be sure to stay tuned. And I hope you do too!
| Chelsea Hunger Games Fan chapter 6 . 7/17/2013
This story is really good please continue
| lydiamartins chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
great first chapter, taylor, :) i can't wait to read your other stories; maybe you put your disclaimer at the top, though, instead of the bottom? one error; "I will wake you up in a few hours." instead of "I will wake you up in a few hours". also; "I didn't know that. But you're fourteen, Clove." instead of "I didn't know that. But your fourteen, Clove" also; "But I'm not like you or Glimmer. People don't tend to like me very much, and I'm not drop dead gorgeous, either" instead of "But Im not like you or Glimmer...People don't tend to like me very much and Im not drop dead gorgeous either"; also, "two," I tell him instead of "two" I tell him. also, there should always be commas before the quote is ended. other than the typographical errors, this chapter is reallyreallyreally good. you portray cato and clove very in character, but they have this sibling-like relationship, at least the way that you've shown them so far gives me that kind of impression.
i'm not sure if you're trying to give off that kind of impression, however, since this is romance/drama (genre) instead of family/drama. just one thing; the interaction between clove and katniss wasn't as strong as i possibly could have wanted; maybe put a little more descriptions instead of just dialogue, but also keep this amount of dialogue? also self esteem instead of "self of steam". other than that, it's good; i'm sorry for all the cc and it probably sounds mean and all, but i'm not trying to sound mean, :) i like the characterization/dialgoue and i can't wait to see how you continue with this. please update soon?