This fkin author rlly needs to learn spacing between dialogues, having them crumpled in bunch in a paragraph is just painful to read, i hope this shit gets fixed

Just finished chapter 161 and it was amazing cant wait for the 8th badge and the battle against palmer also i am sorry for your loss

Hi, didn't you say that Ash's salamence and flygon are also shiny, then why didn't you mention them here?

Please continue to write this story because it is awesome.

Love the story.
Hoping you're continuing this story.
Hope ur doing well

Please update please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

in chapter 62 you said tallow had sky attack as his egg move, then a few paragraphs latter you said his egg move was brave bird. which one is it or is it both?

Please continue we are sick of waiting

Ok I want to ask ? Why annabel ? From the way you write the story it's Kind of obvious to don't want romance to be a big part of the story.

And don't get me wrong I love what you did with ashes character but Annabel as the ship ? Why ? I mean there's no chemistry between the two.

Misty May Dawn I already been say zoe or Even Sylvia Makes more sense I mean ash supposed to be smart as it but he Literally got into a relationship but someone he's known for less than a day ? Ummmm wat ? And again.

I love every other part of this And for the , I did find this unstory master on youtube And I know it's not going past univa.

So obviously that means no serena But Still why such a bad ship I mean , he's been traveling with may all this time I mean I guess if you just prefer annabel It's the only reason I can think of.

Because the two have no chemistry aside from the fact that Oh they're both psyche ummmm ok Sabrina was psychic too And yeah you don't give any indication of what ages are.

There's a couple parts where you say ash is,this Age in that age And you Give ages to don or to may Or even
Misty Except for her birthday When she turns 13 but still Annabel ? Why ?

It Doesn't ruin the story but I think it makes it weak Because it's like I've seen Annabel And I'm not going to lie Let's not lie to ourselves here You can easily mistake her for a boy.

Not to be that guy but just saying I mean , you want ash to end up with someone You know, he's the hero He deserves a princess Not well.

A monotone piece of chalkboard effectively And I know i'm being harsh but That's what we see her as In the anime and in the story.

We really don't get to know her that well so the relationship feels very Force and I get you did that with misty and brock but Ash the main character I figured you want to put a little bit more effort into that.

So that's why i'm asking Why annabel ?

Good

can anyone say in which chapter ash got baby lugia please

Please try to fix the dialogues. I really tried to read this but the dialogues on the same paragraph is hard to read. It’s difficult to figure out who’s speaking. This is my 3rd time trying to get into this fic, but I could not get past the second chapter because of the clustered dialogues. Please put the speakers on their own separate paragraph or line.

any chance you could publish this on amazon as a variation because i would so buy this ebook. if i knew how to ook bind i would make it a paperback

A shame not to be able to see the legendary battle again: metapod vs Metapodgood chapter

I really love this fic! It's so simple and straightforward, yet it really feels like you're following along with Ash's adventure in the anime! It's exciting, fun and sweet all at once!
This is my go-to feel-good fic!

Also, I have listened to StoryMasters audio version on YouTube, and I love that version too!