Reviews for Ash's Pokemon Journey |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know I've read this before but I don't remember where. or why I dropped it and can't remember it. |
![]() ![]() very good chapter. quick question, when you finally get to Unova, are you going to introduce Hilda and Hilbert to Ash or Nate and Rosa? or maybe both? in your opinion which of the four is better for Ash to meet, Hilda and Hilbert or Nate and Rosa? also are Nate and Rosa technically the same characters as Hilda and Hilbert or are they different? meaning are they the same characters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Johto Slowking are cool, but Galarian Slowking are terrifying! |
![]() ![]() Much better then the actual episode. I hated the episode but i love your version |
![]() ![]() ![]() zorua isn't a legendary |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see Ash and Dawn in sinoh grand festival ! |
![]() ![]() Redeemed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter seemed forced tbh. It made it like either ash was braindead or nerfed. Even on quarter finals he used pokemons just like he did when he was a novice. smh, I am not raging coz he lost at quarter, which is fine, but the way he battled and the pokemon he choose were dissapointing. really after all the amazing things he did in the first 5 gyms. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story. I'm re-reading it and I'm at the Johto pokemon league. I think it would been far more poetic to have Pikachu VS Garry Blastoise as there final battle starter VS starter also I know Ash is a lot better in this but it wouldn't of been easy match because it should matter because there old friends/Rivals (I have the soul of an artist when it comes to a story). |
![]() ![]() ![]() The only thing I don’t like about this is that you upload after months. Rest everything is perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you thought of someone to help fix up your chapters? I'm re reading this so I have no idea if you've improved in later chapters but it might be a good idea to get someone to help. |
![]() ![]() Cool chapter. And are you planning to have Ash using one of his Legendary Pokemon to battle against Palmer? I bet Barry will be so surprised to see Ash caught a Legendary and use it to beat his father down in the final round. I can't wait to see his reaction when his father got defeated, hehe. |
![]() ![]() Ash made a bond with Arceus after he helped it to hatch from its egg when all the plates have gathered. And now, Ash will ask Arceus for help when need. I like this. |
![]() ![]() We thought you were dead from COVID-19 since you haven't update this story for passed months. But you were looking for a job. Well, this will be so hard for you in finding a job because a lot of people just lost their jobs due to the virus and hard for them in finding new jobs as a lot of businesses have been closed down due to the increase of the COVID-19. |
![]() ![]() Tomo now has his own Legendary Pokemon. Good for him. Also I cannot wait for Ash and Tomo battle against the last Gym Leader and Ash battle against Barry's father. How things turn out to be? Let's find out as we wait for the update of this story soon. |