can anyone say in which chapter ash got baby lugia please

Please try to fix the dialogues. I really tried to read this but the dialogues on the same paragraph is hard to read. It’s difficult to figure out who’s speaking. This is my 3rd time trying to get into this fic, but I could not get past the second chapter because of the clustered dialogues. Please put the speakers on their own separate paragraph or line.

any chance you could publish this on amazon as a variation because i would so buy this ebook. if i knew how to ook bind i would make it a paperback

A shame not to be able to see the legendary battle again: metapod vs Metapodgood chapter

I really love this fic! It's so simple and straightforward, yet it really feels like you're following along with Ash's adventure in the anime! It's exciting, fun and sweet all at once!
This is my go-to feel-good fic!

Also, I have listened to StoryMasters audio version on YouTube, and I love that version too!

When Ash gets to unova will you make him catch Sawk and Throh?

like how the grand festival went

Olá eu amo sua história ela tá perfeito mas o pokémon tipo fada já aparecem em pokémon antes de kalos cleffa e suas evolução e tipo fada togepi e suas evoluçao tbm são tipo fada pela primeira vez que um silveon apareceu foi e Unova se não me engano

alright your back

Just want to say welcome back and I'm sorry about your grandparents, I know that feeling because I lost both of them too and I missed them. As for the stories, I'm very proud of Ash for winning the Sinnoh Grand Festival and I'm looking forward to the movie chapter and I've been looking forward to hear how Ash and Pikachu's journey in Unova region after Sinnoh region.

Hakuna Matata, I'm just glad you're back and I'm sorry about what happened to your grandparents because I know that feelings too. But I'm looking forward to the the Pokémon movie you going to write so just take your time and take it easy and I hope you feeling okay. I did enjoy the chapter you did and a big congratulations to Ash for winning the Sinnoh Grand Festival and I'll be looking forward to hear Ash and Pikachu's journey in Unova region after Sinnoh region journey.

I understand what you were going through to cause this long wait. But I'm sure you're over it now. And hopefully, Dawn will become Top Coordinator at the next Grand Festival, just like May will. So, when will the next chapter be out? And what will happen in the next chapter?

so one more region, okay. one more badge than off to the league.

I just want to say is welcome back and I sorry about your grandparents. I know how you feel because I lost my grandparents too, I hope you feel better, just take it easy and take one step at a time, ok? As for the story, congratulations to Ash for winning the Sinnoh Grand Festival, I'm looking forward to read the Pokémon Movie chapter and looking for it to read how Ash & Pikachu's journey in Unova region after Sinnoh region.

finally an new update.
really interesting GF ans glad ash won.
Can't wait for the last gym and the league.