| Reviews for Ash's Pokemon Journey |
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  pikachu0311 chapter 3 . 5/8/2013 Another nice chapter! Now I know that Ash want to catch all the pokémon he encounters. OMG Pidgey and spearow learned steel wing and aerial ace along with pikachu learning thunderbolt, agility and iron tail respectively. Keep up the good work and plz update soon. |
 Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 4 . 5/9/2013 Why did you repost Chapter 3 for Chapter 4? |
| NaKita27791 chapter 4 . 5/9/2013 You uploaded the same chapter twice just thought I should let you know |
| StallionWolf chapter 4 . 5/9/2013 Umm...this is just a repeat of the last chapter |
| pikachu0311 chapter 2 . 5/7/2013 Nice chapter! I thought misty would follow Ash but I think she'll come after or there could be no Misty or Brock in the story since it's your fan fic. But I think it'll be boring without friends. Whatever, I didn't expect ash to catch every pokémon he encountered in his way. I also thought he would catch that Gyarados. Sorry for rambling but there are so many interesting things I want to talk about. Let's just stop talking and keep up the nice, or I should say brilliant work. Please update ASAP. |
| Ky111 chapter 3 . 5/8/2013 Great chapter but seeing we all know how all this pretty much goes it's good just to gloss through it and looking forward to when Brock joins them in there travels. Until the next one. |
| iggychan89 chapter 3 . 5/8/2013 You REALLY need to separate talking into different lines, it is so hard to read it the way it is now. Other than that, not bad. |
| Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 2 . 5/7/2013 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. |
| Ky111 chapter 2 . 5/7/2013 Great second chapter and I look forward to having more length to the chapters (this one was pretty good length wise). So Ash caught a Pidgey and a Spearow I wonder which one he'll use or if he'll use both (if it's only one then it has to be Pidgey), I also hope he catches a Scyther perhaps he can find one in Viridian Forest (as it is full of bug pokemon). So the meeting of Misty was short, I wonder if they'll meet up again (also just saying this now and it's just my personal opinion but if romance is going to play any part in this story at some stage it would definitely have to be Ash and Misty, not to fuss who the others end up with). Also hope Ash will travel with Brock in this story. Until the next one. |
| Ky111 chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 Interesting start although giving Ash psychic abilities maybe a bit much plus Aura does give some psychic like abilities like telepathy but I definitely like the idea of a smarter Ash and him catching more and different pokemon. Until the next one. |
| Silver Heart11DOOM chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 love it can be a bit longer more plz |