| Reviews for Ash's Pokemon Journey |
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  Guest chapter 34 . 1/10/2023 Ah never mind Brock got Magcargo |
| Guest chapter 32 . 1/10/2023 Should’ve given Brock the Slugma |
 Aetherium21 chapter 6 . 1/3/2023 This story is really bad in the beginning. |
| Guest chapter 160 . 12/31/2022 Bro, why don’t you update? |
| Harry Shoemaker chapter 1 . 12/31/2022 I hope that you will complete it with such speed because Ash and Pikachu are ending their journey as of 2023... |
| arsenmaik2004 chapter 160 . 12/20/2022 When will there be a sequel |
| Guest chapter 160 . 11/30/2022 You should have ash get all 10 badges in unova |
| Guest chapter 160 . 11/17/2022 Can't wait for the next one |
| magic love ice 123 chapter 160 . 10/16/2022 when ahs will use her pokemon in battles and contest evee's evolutions since we almost didn't see them using it would also be great if dawn used phyone in contest you could make a chapter where another wallace cup of several days is won again where ash uses only the evolutions of eevee in their encounters vs paul, may and drew so let's see how they unfold And update please |
| Jeannot2978 chapter 88 . 10/16/2022 You know, there is a little bit of irony in this. Ash had defeated a Waterlower (Misty) to win the Cascade Badge. And then he defeated another Waterflower (Daisy) to win the Cerulean Contest Ribbon. Can't be coincidence. Or is it? Good writing, and you may want to recheck your spelling. Asa fanfiction writer on DA myself, I have always went back and made any grammatical corrections that were necessary. Keep up the good work. |
| Jeannot2978 chapter 41 . 10/15/2022 If you follow Pokémon Sun and Moon, Ash gets cooking lessons from Kiawe and can now cook simple meals that are tasty. |
| Guest chapter 152 . 10/10/2022 I think Goivanni's son name should be Silver not Jonas |
| Mr.Destructo chapter 1 . 10/9/2022 i mean ash had a ton of pokemon its just you cant by league rule keep more than a certain number on you the rest stayed with professor oak via teleport dude actually had like a whole herd of those bulls and it doesn't help pokemon kept leaving him for reasons misty only wants water pokemon and brocks dream was to be a pokemon breeder not a trainer the only pokemon he had were the leftovers from his days as a rock gym leader and that fox thing he had |
| Lonestar chapter 1 . 10/4/2022 Not a terrible start, I do like the idea of Ash being more prepared for his journey. It just makes more sense. My only complaint is that the chapter was way too short, I'm sure you could have made it longer. But it's not a big deal, it's only a prologue. |
| Bendy3142 chapter 160 . 9/19/2022 When will the next chapter be come |