|Reviews for Trying to be Noticed (PART 1)|
| Sonictails786 chapter 4 . 5/17
Best fanfic ever
| knife pie chapter 6 . 3/16
lol me thinks u kinda took some mlp
what with luna aka pinky
i like it it funnys just thought i would point it out
| Mr.Sir chapter 6 . 2/5
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! My favorite Eeveelution is Espeon. You are my favorite author on Fanfiction. Keep up good work. :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/5
OH MY F****** ARCEUS! A FLAMER! THIS IS A GREAT STORY! WELL MISTER SIR FLAMER, AS I ALWAYS SAY THOSE WHO LIKE TO FLAME GO DOWN IN FLAMES.
SHINY MEGA CHARIZARD: FLAMETHROWER
GIRATINA: YOU GO TO REVERSE WORLD NOW!
ML54 is probably onne of the best authors on Fanfiction.
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/26
OOOOH! I LOVE SYLVEONS THERE SO CUTE!
| Mirage-Faroe chapter 6 . 12/15/2014
The eeveelutions remind me of something, but I can't quite put my finger on it...anyways nice story so far. Keep up the great work
| Eli chapter 6 . 11/6/2014
No more swearing plz
| Eli chapter 3 . 11/6/2014
Love it plz though no swearing
Thx I'm sure you'll get out of the writers block
| Eli chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
I love it so far
| Magyk-Foal1 chapter 6 . 10/13/2014
I've read the majority of your pokemon stories. This and "Critical Condition 1" are the best so far!
Please update soon!
| Mystery girl chapter 6 . 10/9/2014
I liked it but you need a chapter 7 and 8
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/11/2014
Hey bro or broette (lol). When I gave this this story a look over, I didn't really know what to expect... but this is a really good story. Nothing award winning, but still, good none the less. So I don't know if you're busy or lost interest in this story or even are just a little slower at writing, but I look forward to the next chapter. Personally this was a little out of my comfort zone but hey, gotta expand somehow. So do what makes you happy and remember, writing YOUR story should be fun. No one controls how it goes but you. Have a good one! Bye!
-Swift A. Wind
oh and the bro/broette thing is just in case you are a girl... please don't take it the wrong way... using my 3ds here and don't want to have to retype this...
| Le Random Reader chapter 6 . 7/28/2014
Great chapter can't wait for the next one and please keep writing! I'm begging you!
| PrimaChaos chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
its me Shinyninja.
im with Xatu the Ghostshipper on this praise arceus
Random guy: what about Giratina
Me:O–O what the fuck
Random guy: he's badass
Me: i don't give a Flying fuck
Random guy: sure you can just give me a pidgey nicknamed fuck that knows fly
Me: Darkrai get me the hell out of here
Darkrai: as you wish
| PrimaChaos chapter 6 . 7/24/2014
its me shinyninja, did the rise of darkrai help