Reviews for Trying to be Noticed (PART 1)
pleaseupdatefast chapter 6 . 10/31/2016
why r u taking so much time to update ? don't dare to stop the story in the middle . I'm looking forward to chappy 7. if u don't update it fast, then I'll somehow get u and strangle u to death and there should be strong lemons
Thekoopatroop2 chapter 6 . 12/23/2015
more* my auto correct is on crack sorry
Thekoopatroop2 chapter 6 . 12/23/2015
please major or imma die
hunteraizen33 chapter 6 . 7/30/2015
Soo awesome:D
Sonictails786 chapter 4 . 5/17/2015
Best fanfic ever
The Knife Pie chapter 6 . 3/16/2015
lol me thinks u kinda took some mlp

what with luna aka pinky
flashrainbowdash

i like it it funnys just thought i would point it out
Mr.Sir chapter 6 . 2/5/2015
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! My favorite Eeveelution is Espeon. You are my favorite author on Fanfiction. Keep up good work. :)
Guest chapter 4 . 2/5/2015
OH MY F****** ARCEUS! A FLAMER! THIS IS A GREAT STORY! WELL MISTER SIR FLAMER, AS I ALWAYS SAY THOSE WHO LIKE TO FLAME GO DOWN IN FLAMES.

SHINY MEGA CHARIZARD: FLAMETHROWER

GIRATINA: YOU GO TO REVERSE WORLD NOW!
ML54 is probably onne of the best authors on Fanfiction.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/26/2015
OOOOH! I LOVE SYLVEONS THERE SO CUTE!
Mirage-Faroe chapter 6 . 12/15/2014
The eeveelutions remind me of something, but I can't quite put my finger on it...anyways nice story so far. Keep up the great work
Eli chapter 6 . 11/6/2014
No more swearing plz
Eli chapter 3 . 11/6/2014
Love it plz though no swearing
Thx I'm sure you'll get out of the writers block
:D
Eli chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
I love it so far
Magyk-Foal1 chapter 6 . 10/13/2014
I've read the majority of your pokemon stories. This and "Critical Condition 1" are the best so far!
Please update soon!
Mystery girl chapter 6 . 10/9/2014
I liked it but you need a chapter 7 and 8
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